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10/14/2008 12:27:48 PM
GOING TO RUN, im FLOWING FOR FUN, MY RAPPING IS DONE , im PROMISING TO STUN, im GETTING MY GUN, ok so heres the deal bro..the first multi GOING TO RUN then im FLOWING FOR FUN was ok .. c-this is a good start for you.. keep ryming 2 words each time.. and RAPPING IS DONE , im PROMISING TO STUNthis misnt a correct set of multis .. because rapping doesnt ryme with flowing or going like you did in the first set of multis ...
done works because it rymes wiht RUN and FUN and STUN...
get it ... heres what you should have said ...im GOING to RUN then im FLOWING for FUN so your GLOWING is DONE im SHOWING to STUN ....only cap the words that ryme .. look at my version of yours then look at yours.. notice the words that ryme.. each set of multis must have at least 2 words that ryme... if you wanted to make it more complex multis you could say somthing like this..im GOING TO RUN im SHOWING YOU FUN cus when FLOWING DUDES DONE ...GOING is the first word to ryme in the pattern..
SHOWING rymes with going because its the first word of the second pattern
FLOWING rymes with both showing and going because its the first word in the third pattern..alsoto rymes with you and dude.. because they are all the second words in their respective patterns..alsogoing rymes with showing and flowing because they are the third word in each of their respective patterns .. this is lesson 3 .. but first you must master lesson 2...again.. this is wrongGOING TO RUN, im FLOWING FOR FUN, MY RAPPING IS DONE , im PROMISING TO STUN, im GETTING MY GUN, and this is right
im GOING to RUN then im FLOWING for FUN so your GLOWING is DONE im SHOWING to STUN ....so get past lesson one wich is ryming 2 words in each pattern then we wil do lesson 2.. ryming 3 words...and soon you will be able to put together a punch by the time you pass each lesson to lesson 6!like this .. ill take that multi pattern i made for you and make a punch... a punch is like makin fun or sayin somthin that is funny or witty..ex.
your GOING-to-RUN when im SHOWING-to-STUN cus its like my "Gats Hot Tea" the way im "BLOWING-my-GUN"!!get it because you blow hot tea right right.. and you also blow guns .. like you say you blow someone away.... by comparing hot tea to guns i made a punch..or you could say somthing like thisyall STILL- FLIMSY-FEATHERS so ya CHILLED-LIMBS-BE-TEATHERED after the gun "Blows you Away" like REAL-WINDY- WEATHER!
IM sure you get this punch... notice how i rymed 3 words with two patterns and then did a punch in the middle with an ending pattern of multis that related to the punch (wahts in parenthasis)but first ryme 2 words and then we will get to 3 words.. then we will go over simple punches in lesson 3 ... after you pass twosend me the multi patterns from lesson one.. only making all the words ryme correctly .. remember what you said ..the first multi GOING TO RUN then im FLOWING FOR FUN was ok .. c-was good for a two word ryming pattern.. but the rest didnt ryme correctly.. go back over this lesson if you dont remember what to do.. pz.