hahaha this shit is fire i aint evening playing wid your ass's beat dope lyrics was nice sequel was better but eyeball was still hot on this just needs to up his game abit still dope tho
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damn that was sick, legacy was hot. lol @ the jurrasic park beat, reminded me of posta boy. that shit was hot. paul''s flow was off beat at parts but i''m just not used to the accent i guess. lyrics were straight. decent audio.
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10/16/2006 3:25:55 PM
quoteposted by victor vroom damn that was sick, eyeball was hot. lol @ the jurrasic park beat, reminded me of posta boy. that shit was hot. legacy's flow was off beat at parts but i'm just not used to the accent i guess. lyrics were straight. decent audio.
^^^^^u got it twisted son.......i was the girl rapping n no i dont have a english voice
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10/16/2006 4:22:03 PM
isnt that the fival goes west sample lol
but the beats nice ...sequell did a good job ..off at point ..delivery wasnt every solid ...overall 6/10
eye ball ..hmm..cant really understand half of wat you sayin ..flow was awful...delivery was way off beat...vocals is monotone & boring ... over all 2/10
over all decent track but both yall need work still ...6/10
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10/16/2006 5:35:53 PM
ite paul check it out
dont try & record ya whole verse at once..shit never works out well..start off with tryin to record just a few lines like 4 or so ..& keep doin it untill u get it how u want it to sound with more emotion & cleaner delivery..it dont come over night trust that..shit takes alot of time..but eventually you'll learn..the accent kinda throws off wat your sayin..doesnt effect your flow but it does effect how ppl hear the lyrics..
so try & speak clearer...u kno how sum ppl talk wit there mouths wide as fuck lol to make shit sound clearer..try doin that when you spit namean.. it'll help i promise..
but i mean theres really no more feedback i can give u on how to elevate ya vocals..it really just takes practice..all i can give u is sum pointers..i dont mean to be mean or nuttin if thats how i come across but i dont sugar coat anything i just tell it how it is..cause ppl sittin in here sayin thats sick..blah blah ..aint gon help u improve its just gon gass you & you gon set ya self up for dissapointment..so just keep at it is my only suggestion ..fuck da haters & wat anybody thinks..cause there aint one rapper or singer alive who didntsound wack as fuck & sound like shit the first dozen times they tried to rap or sing..it takes alot of time & patience ..its very time consuming yo ..but aye do ya thing & stay up pz