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Long Key.Deep!Dangerouswordz!Creation Of A Monster
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11/11/2006 12:53:00 AM reply with quote send message to big money

Aight Just Read



A Labatory,Were I Was Created Might Think This Horror But This A Sadder Story,My Creatore's,The One's Who Have Been Planning This For Year's Now Im Here Screaming Die Premedatatore's,Im Brainless&Hartless,I Had A Before Life Of A Gangster But Now I Have No Stainless To Start This,Now A Mind Very Fragile,I'll Admit I Shined
Yet Still Scary And Attile,Tube's Hooked Up,Than Slightly I Looked Up
And See A Scientist Who's Shooked Up,Chained And Locked,mad About It
But Cant Think Because My Brain Is Shot,Scientist's And Doctor's All
Around,Brake My Chain's I Am Pist Getting But Than Falling Down,
Temtation's Growing,Getting Stronger Fast And My Limatation's Are
Slowing,Looked Upon As A Reject,Bye These People Well Hooked On Trying
To Connect,Still Emotionless,Still Growing Stronger About To Bail
And Going To Kill This Unmotionless,I Get Up,Grab A Scientist Bye
His Neck My Grip Wont Let Up,Ironicly I find My Self Chronicly
Killing 3 And Injuring 3 This Is 6 But Not A Star War's Trilogy,
Punching The Door,Now Im Thinking It's Useless Hunching To The Floor
But Find A Key Let's Use This.


Outside Life........


First Few Month's,On My Own Hunger Is Growing To Starvashen To Eat I
Gotta Burst Through These Cunt's,Seeing Light,But Not Understanding
And All With This Being Night,Traveling Forward,I See Many Buliding's
So I Start To Move Savaging Toward,Strange Thing's,Today I Seen Sombody Holding A Communication Device That Changed Ring's,Tall Thing's,Building's So Bold And Plain They Reminded Of Trees Like It
Was Fall's Spring,Climbing On Top,Litterly Going Up A Building Like
The Rest But Finally I Dont Drop,Form's Of Transpirtation,Strange
Fuel In These "cars" It Drip's On Me And Sworm's A Tranfirmation,
Gradually Strang,New Hight,New,Color,New Width,New Mind,But I Cant
Be Fucked With As I Fradually Change,New Charicteristic's,Meaner
And Stronger But A Science Group Is Out To Get Me Needa Find There
Crew Arrifmatic's And It Look's As If They Sniff Them Brick's,Crazy
Scientist's,Trying To Capture Me One Mayne Inpaticular But What Im
Asking About Him Is Wear's His Lazy Eye In This?,Death To All,Yes
I Killed Them All Except One So Before I Killed Him I Let Him Take
A Befor He Fall,Militarey Involvent,They Used Nuc's Now They Killing Me And That Pretty Much Solved It,Not Quite,I Get Up But Certain Area's Of Me Still Fragile And Guess What?He Bust His Shot Just Right!


It Dont Have To Be Good It Was Just Straight Off The Top
It Would'nt Let Me Post It On My Other Account lol

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11/11/2006 12:54:46 AM reply with quote send message to 1DangerousWordz1 Post Reply

Upp'n

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11/11/2006 1:18:07 AM reply with quote send message to schizophrenic Post Reply

Concept Wise, Wordplay Was Great? But Where's The Flow? That's The Only Thing U Lackin. Keep It Up Tho.

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11/11/2006 1:48:02 AM reply with quote send message to TruMiC Post Reply

shit had no idea u was big money.. u have improved lika bitch man good shit. but like dude said your lacking flow.. its decent.. but not good enough, the better you flow the more ppl will read your shit coz its easier to read.. still shit was decent like 7.3/10

Pz


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11/11/2006 2:25:35 AM reply with quote send message to 1DangerousWordz1 Post Reply

lol Upp'n

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