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5/10/2007 2:42:38 AM
..$$ Chi MoNeY $$..
My scope n lead is spread n ENCLOSE’N-YA-HEAD, but who cares? I BET-NO-ONE’S-YA-FRIEND, so time of ya death?, this VETS-SHOW’N-YA-WHEN, cuz ya TEXT?-NO-WAY-CONTENDS,.. your just ‘too big for ya britches’ so EXPOSED-IN-THE-END!!//(britches/pants, end/butt/ass lol) Sets? Im known-ta-defend! So when my RAP-TOOLS,-POINT?! U wont ACT-KOOL,-BOI! n ‘point lead at Money?’ , not if u TATOO’D-COINS, so my ‘nine blew clipz’, in hips, to ‘drive threw quick’ like a FAST-FOOD-JOINT!!// N any of u LONELY,-LIL-FAGS,-WORK?! Nope! so still tryin ta CLONE-ME-WIT-RAP-WORK, but if so, me n my HOMIES-WILL-SMASH-NERDS, the strap burns! Till ya CHROMIES-ARE-CAPTURED, SLOWLY-IN-PLASTER n wit ‘ease,-drop these kids’, u NOSEY-LIL-BASTARDS!!//(ease-drop/eavesdrop/listen’n in on people) Damn! I slam loud sounds as my CHROME’S-KOOL,-SNOUTS-OUT, pops loud! So ya DOME?-DROOLS-OUT-FROWNS, cuz ya KNOWN-TOOLS?-SOUND-CLOWNED! n we're ‘bored of ya shit’ like an OLD-SCHOOL-OUT-HOUSE!!//(bored/board) N u contradict yaself! labels aren’t given u PRO’S-NO,-MINOR-DEALS, cuz u GROSE-HOES-LIKE-TA-SQUEEL, n only HOMO’S-LIKE-YER-FEEL, while your ‘rusty’ n ‘tire-out’ like OLD-LOW-RIDER-WHEELS!!// Money’s on a gun spree!, READY-TA-BUST-FREE, EMPTY-YA-GUTS,-G! to just leave SEVERAL-BLOODY, as I ‘devour these bitch-ass boxers’ like some EDIBLE-UNDYS!!//
Who the Fuck is spittin as consistent as me?!
Nobody my nigga, but I got cha bacc on this one…HE”S BACC!
Bru still’ah.. SPRAY A MACC, to BLAZE YA BACC wit ASIAN GATS, still LAYIN FACTS, you LAMES IS WACC, only felt PAIN ON WAX, STAIN YA HAT when I BRANG MA AX! cause the last time I “Rolled”, ..”2 Die” like a GAME OF CRAPS // Is you SLOW DUMMY? If you don’t you need to KNOW DUNNY, my FOU’ HUNGRY leave you on da FLOU’ UGLY! than tat a "Stacc on my Dicc" so ya bitch can BLOW MONEY // Go-run-b, ya TEXT WAS NEVER HOT, pop tha TECH, YA LETH’AHS SLOP, im a VET, YA BETTER STOP, cuz you like “Dirt” you’ll get SWEPT INSTEAD OF MOPPED // I’m TAKIN THIS POUND and got a ACHEIN HIP NOW, just to CAKE IN YA TOWN cause You aint a Hussla Hommie! “Reviewin my Barz” tha only time you BREAKIN SHIT DOWN // ya’ll some CAKE BAKED THUGS, my EIGHT SHAKES MUGS, and BREAKS LEGS UP, than I’ll “Hit You Wit A Miccey” like DATE RAPE DRUGS // you know tha beer “Miccey”..duh. you PERPIN A BRAVE HEART BITCH?, I got HeaT-iN-THa-V.. to leave ya SLeeP-In-A-SeA cause BeeFiN-WiT-Me..you’ll neva get a “good Night sleep” like WORKIN THA GRAVEYARD SHIFT // my clip SPITS AND YOU SHIV’AH, my sicc WRITS MAKE YOU QUIV’AH, get RIPPED IM A KILL’AH! Bru will leave “You Wet..Dog” like a PIT IN A RIVER // Who these GUYS STOPIN? Bullets FLY DROP HIM, now you FRIED, STOMPED, AN ya shits “Boot-, Legged” like HIGH TOP TIMBS // Some Hard but MOST JUST BE POPPIN, leave you “Boxed-In”(boxin) like you ‘SPOSE TO BE HOPKINS, ya gun? HOPEFULLY ROCCIN you SaD-FuCC I’ll leave you “BaGGeD-Up” like GROCERY SHOPPIN // smell me?
Ayo Skriptz Let Em Fell Somethin..
SKRIPTZ, an um DESIGNED TAH MOVE, dats why im ALIGNED WIT CREW that'ah 'come to yuh door with a choppah'..like that SHINING DUDE...an um SHININ DUDE..BELIEVE ITS PLAT AND DIAMONDS wit more carrots on the plate den VEGAN APPITIZERS..SIEZE EM! CAP THEY SIDES UP..give em SIEZURES..CAT YUH TIMES UP fah claimin great..like you RAISIN' TREYS...GUESS WHAT i know you PLAY WIT EIGHTS NEVA.so i'll put some bright splatters on yuh chest like a BATHIN' APE SWEATER..leave yuh moms prayin' "amazin grace" lectures when um THRUSTIN MY PSALMS, SKRIPTZ keep DUST IN MUH PALMS PRICK that takes me from here into the hilton, paris..like um FUCKIN THAT BLONDE BITCH..FLUSTERED? ITS ON DEN..when um' BUSTIN' A BOMB WHICH once dah LONG WICK's GONE..SHIT!!! even yuh CUSTOMERS GONE, DICK!!..mad.libz...um runnin wit'ah RUDE AN' FLY CLIQUE...CLICK tha TOOLS WE RIDE WIT..and more big screens flippin in that ride den a MOVIN' SIDEKICK..FLUENT, LIVE WIT words..only DAH TRUEST ART MAKES ME wish A MOVEMENT STARTS RAISING..with a strap to dudes shoulders like AMUSEMENT PARK SAFETY..you TRUENT NARCS AINT ME..im on it SUNRISE TAH SUN UP so when GUNS CHIME, YOU DUMB SLUTS get SLUMPED, FIND YUH SON BUCKED soon as SOME NINES ARE UNTUCKED..get yuh HUNG...MINUS SOME STUFF when i CUT SOUTH..so like bans on poker...im leavin' nigguhs 'GUTS OUT'!!..get TOUCHED, OUCH!! cus MOST RATS IS BOGUS..so i HOPE CATS IS FOCUSED, cus im one of dah hardest out!! jus DON'T ASK THE VOTERS!! EZ...
SPRAY A MACC, to BLAZE YA BACC wit ASIAN GATS, still LAYIN FACTS, you LAMES IS WACC, only felt PAIN ON WAX, STAIN YA HAT when I BRANG MA AX! cause the last time I “Rolled”, ..”2 Die” like a GAME OF CRAPS //
I’m TAKIN THIS POUND and got a ACHEIN HIP NOW, just to CAKE IN YA TOWN cause You aint a Hussla Hommie! “Reviewin my Barz” tha only time you BREAKIN SHIT DOWN // ya’ll some CAKE BAKED THUGS, my EIGHT SHAKES MUGS, and BREAKS LEGS UP, than I’ll “Hit You Wit A Miccey” like DATE RAPE DRUGS // you know tha beer “Miccey”..duh. you PERPIN A BRAVE HEART BITCH?, I got HeaT-iN-THa-V.. to leave ya SLeeP-In-A-SeA cause BeeFiN-WiT-Me..you’ll neva get a “good Night sleep” like WORKIN THA GRAVEYARD SHIFT //
Some Hard but MOST JUST BE POPPIN, leave you “Boxed-In”(boxin) like you ‘SPOSE TO BE HOPKINS, ya gun? HOPEFULLY ROCCIN you SaD-FuCC I’ll leave you “BaGGeD-Up” like GROCERY SHOPPIN // smell me?
Best from skriptz:
SKRIPTZ, an um DESIGNED TAH MOVE, dats why im ALIGNED WIT CREW that'ah 'come to yuh door with a choppah'..like that SHINING DUDE...an um SHININ DUDE..BELIEVE ITS PLAT AND DIAMONDS wit more carrots on the plate den VEGAN APPITIZERS..SIEZE EM! CAP THEY SIDES UP..give em SIEZURES..CAT YUH TIMES UP fah claimin great..like you RAISIN' TREYS...GUESS WHAT i know you PLAY WIT EIGHTS NEVA.so i'll put some bright splatters on yuh chest like a BATHIN' APE SWEATER..
FLUSTERED? ITS ON DEN..when um' BUSTIN' A BOMB WHICH once dah LONG WICK's GONE..SHIT!!! even yuh CUSTOMERS GONE, DICK!!..mad.libz...um runnin wit'ah RUDE AN' FLY CLIQUE...CLICK tha TOOLS WE RIDE WIT..
only DAH TRUEST ART MAKES ME wish A MOVEMENT STARTS RAISING..with a strap to dudes shoulders like AMUSEMENT PARK SAFETY..you TRUENT NARCS AINT ME..im on it SUNRISE TAH SUN UP so when GUNS CHIME, YOU DUMB SLUTS get SLUMPED, FIND YUH SON BUCKED soon as SOME NINES ARE UNTUCKED..get yuh HUNG...MINUS SOME STUFF when i CUT SOUTH..so like bans on poker...im leavin' nigguhs 'GUTS OUT'!!..get TOUCHED, OUCH!! cus MOST RATS IS BOGUS..so i HOPE CATS IS FOCUSED, cus im one of dah hardest out!! jus DON'T ASK THE VOTERS!! EZ...
My scope n lead is spread n ENCLOSE’N-YA-HEAD, but who cares? I BET-NO-ONE’S-YA-FRIEND, so time of ya death?, this VETS-SHOW’N-YA-WHEN, cuz ya TEXT?-NO-WAY-CONTENDS,.. your just ‘too big for ya britches’ so EXPOSED-IN-THE-END!!//(britches/pants, end/butt/ass lol) Sets? Im known-ta-defend! So when my RAP-TOOLS,-POINT?! U wont ACT-KOOL,-BOI! n ‘point lead at Money?’ , not if u TATOO’D-COINS, so my ‘nine blew clipz’, in hips, to ‘drive threw quick’ like a FAST-FOOD-JOINT!!//
Damn! I slam loud sounds as my CHROME’S-KOOL,-SNOUTS-OUT, pops loud! So ya DOME?-DROOLS-OUT-FROWNS, cuz ya KNOWN-TOOLS?-SOUND-CLOWNED! n we're ‘bored of ya shit’ like an OLD-SCHOOL-OUT-HOUSE!!//(bored/board) N u contradict yaself! labels aren’t given u PRO’S-NO,-MINOR-DEALS, cuz u GROSE-HOES-LIKE-TA-SQUEEL, n only HOMO’S-LIKE-YER-FEEL, while your ‘rusty’ n ‘tire-out’ like OLD-LOW-RIDER-WHEELS!!// Money’s on a gun spree!, READY-TA-BUST-FREE, EMPTY-YA-GUTS,-G! to just leave SEVERAL-BLOODY, as I ‘devour these bitch-ass boxers’ like some EDIBLE-UNDYS!!//
@ sum of the stuff u been sayin... Nice though fammo 9/10
Best from bru:
SPRAY A MACC, to BLAZE YA BACC wit ASIAN GATS, still LAYIN FACTS, you LAMES IS WACC, only felt PAIN ON WAX, STAIN YA HAT when I BRANG MA AX! cause the last time I “Rolled”, ..”2 Die” like a GAME OF CRAPS //
I’m TAKIN THIS POUND and got a ACHEIN HIP NOW, just to CAKE IN YA TOWN cause You aint a Hussla Hommie! “Reviewin my Barz” tha only time you BREAKIN SHIT DOWN // ya’ll some CAKE BAKED THUGS, my EIGHT SHAKES MUGS, and BREAKS LEGS UP, than I’ll “Hit You Wit A Miccey” like DATE RAPE DRUGS // you know tha beer “Miccey”..duh. you PERPIN A BRAVE HEART BITCH?, I got HeaT-iN-THa-V.. to leave ya SLeeP-In-A-SeA cause BeeFiN-WiT-Me..you’ll neva get a “good Night sleep” like WORKIN THA GRAVEYARD SHIFT //
Some Hard but MOST JUST BE POPPIN, leave you “Boxed-In”(boxin) like you ‘SPOSE TO BE HOPKINS, ya gun? HOPEFULLY ROCCIN you SaD-FuCC I’ll leave you “BaGGeD-Up” like GROCERY SHOPPIN // smell me?
st8 murkage, whole shit waz fire B 9.5/10, feelin dat shit
Best from skriptz:
SKRIPTZ, an um DESIGNED TAH MOVE, dats why im ALIGNED WIT CREW that'ah 'come to yuh door with a choppah'..like that SHINING DUDE...an um SHININ DUDE..BELIEVE ITS PLAT AND DIAMONDS wit more carrots on the plate den VEGAN APPITIZERS..SIEZE EM! CAP THEY SIDES UP..give em SIEZURES..CAT YUH TIMES UP fah claimin great..like you RAISIN' TREYS...GUESS WHAT i know you PLAY WIT EIGHTS NEVA.so i'll put some bright splatters on yuh chest like a BATHIN' APE SWEATER..
FLUSTERED? ITS ON DEN..when um' BUSTIN' A BOMB WHICH once dah LONG WICK's GONE..SHIT!!! even yuh CUSTOMERS GONE, DICK!!..mad.libz...um runnin wit'ah RUDE AN' FLY CLIQUE...CLICK tha TOOLS WE RIDE WIT..
only DAH TRUEST ART MAKES ME wish A MOVEMENT STARTS RAISING..with a strap to dudes shoulders like AMUSEMENT PARK SAFETY..you TRUENT NARCS AINT ME..im on it SUNRISE TAH SUN UP so when GUNS CHIME, YOU DUMB SLUTS get SLUMPED, FIND YUH SON BUCKED soon as SOME NINES ARE UNTUCKED..get yuh HUNG...MINUS SOME STUFF when i CUT SOUTH..so like bans on poker...im leavin' nigguhs 'GUTS OUT'!!..get TOUCHED, OUCH!! cus MOST RATS IS BOGUS..so i HOPE CATS IS FOCUSED, cus im one of dah hardest out!! jus DON'T ASK THE VOTERS!! EZ...
by far the hardest out, hell rell and style p aint messing witchu ma dude lol naw, but 9/10
My scope n lead is spread n ENCLOSE’N-YA-HEAD, but who cares? I BET-NO-ONE’S-YA-FRIEND, so time of ya death?, this VETS-SHOW’N-YA-WHEN, cuz ya TEXT?-NO-WAY-CONTENDS,.. your just ‘too big for ya britches’ so EXPOSED-IN-THE-END!!//(britches/pants, end/butt/ass lol)
punch could have been worded better multies seemed abit forced 7/10
Sets? Im known-ta-defend! So when my RAP-TOOLS,-POINT?! U wont ACT-KOOL,-BOI! n ‘point lead at Money?’ , not if u TATOO’D-COINS, so my ‘nine blew clipz’, in hips, to ‘drive threw quick’ like a FAST-FOOD-JOINT!!//
played as fuck come on now money smh... 5/10
N any of u LONELY,-LIL-FAGS,-WORK?! Nope! so still tryin ta CLONE-ME-WIT-RAP-WORK, but if so, me n my HOMIES-WILL-SMASH-NERDS, the strap burns! Till ya CHROMIES-ARE-CAPTURED, SLOWLY-IN-PLASTER n wit ‘ease,-drop these kids’, u NOSEY-LIL-BASTARDS!!//(ease-drop/eavesdrop/listen’n in on people)
lols liked this one best bar so far 8/10
Damn! I slam loud sounds as my CHROME’S-KOOL,-SNOUTS-OUT, pops loud! So ya DOME?-DROOLS-OUT-FROWNS, cuz ya KNOWN-TOOLS?-SOUND-CLOWNED! n we're ‘bored of ya shit’ like an OLD-SCHOOL-OUT-HOUSE!!//(bored/board)
dome drools out frowns ... come on now chi that dont make sense lols... 5/10 punch was nice tho
N u contradict yaself! labels aren’t given u PRO’S-NO,-MINOR-DEALS, cuz u GROSE-HOES-LIKE-TA-SQUEEL, n only HOMO’S-LIKE-YER-FEEL, while your ‘rusty’ n ‘tire-out’ like OLD-LOW-RIDER-WHEELS!!//
liked this concept seems abit played but nice bar 7/10
Money’s on a gun spree!, READY-TA-BUST-FREE, EMPTY-YA-GUTS,-G! to just leave SEVERAL-BLOODY, as I ‘devour these bitch-ass boxers’ like some EDIBLE-UNDYS!!//
lols liked that the change of multies threw the flow of tho still nice bar 7/10
Bru still’ah.. SPRAY A MACC, to BLAZE YA BACC wit ASIAN GATS, still LAYIN FACTS, you LAMES IS WACC, only felt PAIN ON WAX, STAIN YA HAT when I BRANG MA AX! cause the last time I “Rolled”, ..”2 Die” like a GAME OF CRAPS //
punch was nice but brang dont go wid the rest of ya multies forced... 7/10
Is you SLOW DUMMY? If you don’t you need to KNOW DUNNY, my FOU’ HUNGRY leave you on da FLOU’ UGLY! than tat a "Stacc on my Dicc" so ya bitch can BLOW MONEY //
mad played 4/10
Go-run-b, ya TEXT WAS NEVER HOT, pop tha TECH, YA LETH’AHS SLOP, im a VET, YA BETTER STOP, cuz you like “Dirt” you’ll get SWEPT INSTEAD OF MOPPED //
liked this bar solid nothing specail or above average 7/10
I’m TAKIN THIS POUND and got a ACHEIN HIP NOW, just to CAKE IN YA TOWN cause You aint a Hussla Hommie! “Reviewin my Barz” tha only time you BREAKIN SHIT DOWN //
cake in ya town wtf punch was meh 5/10
ya’ll some CAKE BAKED THUGS, my EIGHT SHAKES MUGS, and BREAKS LEGS UP, than I’ll “Hit You Wit A Miccey” like DATE RAPE DRUGS // you know tha beer “Miccey”..duh.
liked this pretty nice 7.5/10
you PERPIN A BRAVE HEART BITCH?, I got HeaT-iN-THa-V.. to leave ya SLeeP-In-A-SeA cause BeeFiN-WiT-Me..you’ll neva get a “good Night sleep” like WORKIN THA GRAVEYARD SHIFT //
heat in the V wats the V??? punch was aite concept is played tho... 6/10
my clip SPITS AND YOU SHIV’AH, my sicc WRITS MAKE YOU QUIV’AH, get RIPPED IM A KILL’AH! Bru will leave “You Wet..Dog” like a PIT IN A RIVER //
iunno get the punch on this wat has a pit in a river which i aint never seen got to do wid a dawg??? explain lease...
Who these GUYS STOPIN? Bullets FLY DROP HIM, now you FRIED, STOMPED, AN ya shits “Boot-, Legged” like HIGH TOP TIMBS //
liked this concept seems playes tho but nice flip 7.6/10
Some Hard but MOST JUST BE POPPIN, leave you “Boxed-In”(boxin) like you ‘SPOSE TO BE HOPKINS, ya gun? HOPEFULLY ROCCIN you SaD-FuCC I’ll leave you “BaGGeD-Up” like GROCERY SHOPPIN // smell me?
played 6/10
SKRIPTZ, an um DESIGNED TAH MOVE, dats why im ALIGNED WIT CREW that'ah 'come to yuh door with a choppah'..like that SHINING DUDE...an um SHININ DUDE..BELIEVE ITS PLAT AND DIAMONDS wit more carrots on the plate den VEGAN APPITIZERS..SIEZE EM! CAP THEY SIDES UP..give em SIEZURES..CAT YUH TIMES UP fah claimin great..like you RAISIN' TREYS...GUESS WHAT i know you PLAY WIT EIGHTS NEVA.so i'll put some bright splatters on yuh chest like a BATHIN' APE SWEATER..leave yuh moms prayin' "amazin grace" lectures when um THRUSTIN MY PSALMS, SKRIPTZ keep DUST IN MUH PALMS PRICK that takes me from here into the hilton, paris..like um FUCKIN THAT BLONDE BITCH..FLUSTERED? ITS ON DEN..when um' BUSTIN' A BOMB WHICH once dah LONG WICK's GONE..SHIT!!! even yuh CUSTOMERS GONE, DICK!!..mad.libz...um runnin wit'ah RUDE AN' FLY CLIQUE...CLICK tha TOOLS WE RIDE WIT..and more big screens flippin in that ride den a MOVIN' SIDEKICK..FLUENT, LIVE WIT words..only DAH TRUEST ART MAKES ME wish A MOVEMENT STARTS RAISING..with a strap to dudes shoulders like AMUSEMENT PARK SAFETY..you TRUENT NARCS AINT ME..im on it SUNRISE TAH SUN UP so when GUNS CHIME, YOU DUMB SLUTS get SLUMPED, FIND YUH SON BUCKED soon as SOME NINES ARE UNTUCKED..get yuh HUNG...MINUS SOME STUFF when i CUT SOUTH..so like bans on poker...im leavin' nigguhs 'GUTS OUT'!!..get TOUCHED, OUCH!! cus MOST RATS IS BOGUS..so i HOPE CATS IS FOCUSED, cus im one of dah hardest out!! jus DON'T ASK THE VOTERS!! EZ...
if youd have structerd ya shit abit clearer i might have got it..and as i cant do bar for bar for you there was some nice punches in there but other shit was just either not making sense to me or i couldnt get the flow of it seemed abit all over the place from reading it... but whole verse averall 7/10
EDIT: Heat In Tha V = a Gun in tha Car a "V" = a V6, V8, V12..etc...duh.
but no matter how played that was i aint touch keys in like a good month and a half and u still CANT SEE ME....STILL WAITING FOR THAT BATTLE FOR YA ADMIN SPOT...i aint forgot yet..
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quoteposted by Brutal_Barz Cake as in make money..American Slang i guess
and Pit as in Pitbull = Dog
but no matter how played that was i aint touch keys in like a good month and a half and u still CANT SEE ME....STILL WAITING FOR THAT BATTLE FOR YA ADMIN SPOT...i aint forgot yet..
hmm personally i think me ink and chi had a better collab than this real talk!!!!
rofl ok i see now ...
and i didnt agree to battling for ma admin spot....
but if ya wanna battle...
send it 4 barz...
admin spots arnt up for grabs to win from a battle...
chi mizzle: some of ur multies are fucked up ie: the one with the board concept. i woulda jus scrapped that whole line. other lines were good for the most part, keep doin that wordplay/punchline shit, the punches are very creative and original.
bru bizzy: aw man i love ur style. shit is gutta gutta, flow and multies are nice. punchlines are decent too.
epic skrizzipts: uhhhh. you already know my nigga. flow is cool. mutleis are nice. try incorporating some wordplay kinda punches like chi does. overall shit is mad clean tho.
5/10/2007 2:42:38 AM
lol
@ sum of the stuff u been sayin... Nice though fammo 9/10
punch was meh 5/10
