not bad not bad... truly not really down with the shit talk im hard type a hip hop any more but least you kept it lyrical and somewhat intelligent... i dont know if you have the raw waves or not, but if you do bring up the gain on the foot drum in your beat on the game is ours.. bring up the lows and mids on the second guys verse, his voice sounds hallow... bring down the decay on the hook so your words finish out longer.. not a bad track by any means, good work.
lets ride. NICE.. i can feel this more cuz your actually talkin bout somthin rather just bouncin ya lips.. with this one i wanan hear the mids more, i dont know what kinda reverb you got on there but its makin the voice sound empty.. maybe try with low gain on the record, doing the whole verses once more for undertones/depth.. keep that track at negative gain to the first one so that your not hearing it over or in competition with the first one but it ads depth to it..
good work, all love in the crit.. stay at it,1,press.
11/23/2007 7:40:41 PM
mixtape leakin huh? lol it's all good tho
