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2006
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12/20/2007 3:40:52 PM
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I''m Back....I''m Trying This OUt.....Please tell me what i need to work on......
hey baby i know you think of me at night and you know i won''t put up to much of a fight, just to get on your good side is my guiding light.
now ya know i can spit this flow just for my baby gurl, hmmm i wonder if she can say your my world. i know it ain''t to much to ask for but let me know, is it me you or another fucka, cuz baby you know i can trust ya and don''t eva let me bust ya.
you know when i write this song, i write for ya health, just keepin you in mind is my wealth, don''t need that million dollar check just to get in hip hop hall of fame. i know its jus a game, and its lame, but don''t let that put you in shame.
i get a lot hugs smooches from other gurls, but its nothing gettin a soft touch like yours, you got a smile that lights up a room, a million miles away you know how to get a smile out of gloom,
baby baby baby gurl, you know your my world don''t let that change ecspicialy fo another gurl, you know i got you locked inside my heart from the very start, when your around my blood races like a go-kart.
damn dude, all i can think is, step yo game way tha hell up. what i'm seeing is the typical approach to a song for a lady/ladies, you dumb it down, that aint cool man, if anyone appreciates artful words, its a female, they whole design is to think then shoot, men shoot then think, so you should if anything make it more complex, that simple simon stuff is beneath anyone calling them self a rapper.
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