Posts: 14
Sex: male
Join Date: Jan,
2008
Location:
retired
2/2/2008 2:59:40 PM
yo u butter, so just spread on my bread jus lik emcees i eat butter with bread i dont tallk to no feds allegedly tha nigga was talkin to dem on tha top roof fake assasins, decoy cat, someone i see, i fold up pussy when he wallk, he froze up infront of him is tha ghostface, tha one who rhyme harder than mase never caught ah case but i will for goin at this nigga face and u what they say about him , they dont last long in tha streets they far from ah dyin breed, spineless without ah creed ah thorobreed, equals ghost face thorobread nigga that carries thorobreed's creed yes in deed i keep it real 4 street. giving any beat i'll murder that beat unconsciously tha same way i'll murder any beef......i'm cookin
all dis fuka spread is nut on his head/ do it all ova lik sum butta on bread/ comin at me is suicide cuz lyricaly ya dead/ fukn round here itll be off wit ya head/ u's a bitch muthafuka carryn no street cred/ i dont no how u thot dis was gon end wit all dat shit u said/
aint no ghostface u mor lik casper/ fak shit u spittn fill real gs wit laughter/ ill kill ya tak ya hom 2 ya mom den stab her/ nail ya body 2 rafters/ yo flows so wak u aint even a rapper/ i don made betta shit sittn on da crapper
u aint no rapper jus go play wit ya dildo/ get off da streets cuz youll neva b real ho/ so quit actin hard b4 u made a real ghost.
to be honest i have no idea to vote for cuz none of you had multi''s, punches,i saw like 1 personal, there was no wordplay, some of the bars didnt match or rhyme, and was this supose to be a thread or booth battle???
no hate to any one of you at all, just need to elevate a lil more explore the site an battle''s i beleive there is even a battling guide set up...just keep at it though dont give up on it, youll get there soon enough
Didn't see Any Rules...So Dont Know If Feeding Off A Verse Was Allowed... Rules Woulda Helped For Votes , But Its All Good...
GHOSTFACE...
Your Verse Was Not Bad...The Way It Was Set Up Was...
i.e.
i dont tallk to no feds allegedly tha nigga was talkin to dem on tha top roof fake assasins, decoy cat, someone i see, i fold up pussy when he wallk, he froze up
Structure is Bad...
streetop assasin...
Your verse was better in reference to structure, it was clearer to read and better overall... I Would not be able to say it would have been better, if u didnt feed off of GHOSTS verse, Going back to what i mean as far as there needs to be a RULE SET-UP... You had better multis, not to much better, but better, flow was better, and lines were slightly more creative...
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