VEXX: I'm a 'Beat this Mocked One' so peep this coward if ya wanna SEE A FLOP REHEARSAL Fekt ' He's a dropped Crumb' when i 'Squeeze a hot one' like doing PIZZA POP COMMERCIALS YOU BEATEN VEXX?? how when YOU CHEEPIIN TEXT every word, phrase n key DUDE, YOU BEAT UNLESS you apologize for for being a fake, CREWS SEEN HIM STRESS, so start shit hommmie Like i DO WID E'S N F'S (FE is the start of his name....this nigguh SHIT!!) DUDE GRIND BUT HE WACK i'm the type to steal ya NEW SIGNED FITTED n you could WHINE BUT RELAX cuz my RUGE FINDING HIS LATS! and really you ain't need to be a Gretzkey to get TWO NINES ON YA BACK I freestyle nigguh, you probally been WRITTING FOR DAYS and i'm LIKING MY BLADES so Really Kid, this a loose loose situation like Activists FIGHTING WID GAYS You text garbage in fact Every THINGS A MOCKERY, when i Bring my best, it BRINGS A PROBLEM G, yous a fuckin joke, Cuz you stay gettin 'More laughs' than the KINGS OF COMEDY
fekt: Home boi talkin bout crews seen me stress??? who??? talkin bout every word every phrase is usless??? aint even txt shit really on tha net B4..haha you prewritin brah???
this dude talk bout he tha father of sixhot..
"Mock"-ingburd ima son ya..haha...wtf..
Thats wassup, say what you had to say comedian??/ only one that your beatin is tha gay guy you be 'skeet n in'// haha i sed "No apologies" and have "No internet crew"/??? you a G? fake maphuka thats just 'internet you'!// fo rill what your 'gats do?' 'swords and all that'// you prolly a broke ass 'fat dude' that plays 'lord of warcraft'// Vexx talk shit like a 'ass hole', cant rap, only 'spit like a nasty ho'// feel that your bars streched like a limo, i put ya head on a pillow like ya layin in a casket bro// You 'Not tha father of Six' Quixx and Vexx need 'Bloked from tha Page' Fool i 'Chop you to bits quick like helocopter blades'///// you gotta feel me..
didint kno who to vote for really.... both had weak punchlines... F's multies made more sence... but vex's structure was more complex... overal... i just voted vex because of filler... F had some ok lines but also some filler lines like this
sed "No apologies" and have "No internet crew"/??? you a G? fake maphuka thats just 'internet you'!//
so no hate... but i didnt really like this battle... but ima hav to go with vex... uppin for votes..
outlaw, i didnt really look at it as a filler, just a point to speak on..he talkin bout "you apologize for for being a fake, CREWS SEEN HIM STRESS" and ive not apologized fo shyt or no crew even seen me,,,haha...fuc it..thanx for votin tho..finally.....JaY NiCe dawg, learn what a multi is, then come back and vote...
I mean if U know what a Multi is Why u cant tell me if U already know.. lol Why make things diffcult.. ha ha But if u dont wanna tell me I'll find out tho.
jay nice a multie is multiple rhymes at the end of lines like when vex says on one line flop rehearsals and on the end of the next he says pop commercials pop and flop rhyme and rehearsals and commercials rhyme if that helps u out
and down to the battle
vexx serious i aint gona hate like u probs think i would ima tell it how it is
your first line i feel was a bit stretched didnt flow to nice most of the rest of the verse flowed nice although i dont quite understand y u structure your lines all over the place. and your wordplay wasnt great
flow 8 outta ten multies 7 outta ten wordplay 6 outta ten punches 6 outta ten
best line:
Fekt ' He's a dropped Crumb' when i 'Squeeze a hot one' like doing PIZZA POP COMMERCIALS
i thought it was probs your best line becuase of the wordplay in it droped crumb hot one talkin about pizza pop was a nice concept
fekt: to be honest im not hatin but i wasnt really feelin your verse i didnt think your punches were good i thought you tried to come a bit more personal but it didnt really hit i dont think your multies or complexity were great 2bh however i thought your structure was good if vexx can take anythin from this battle it should b to neaten his lines up and structure his bars better
flow was ok becuase of the structure shorter lines flow better but woulda flowed better with nicer multies
flow- 8 outta ten multies - 6 outta ten wordplay - 6 outta ten i thought u was lacking on cencepts punches - 6 outta ten
i think you where headin in the right direction with the personals but just wasnt worded great and concepts coulda been made better
fav line:
your bars streched like a limo, i put ya head on a pillow like ya layin in a casket bro
i think there wasnt really a punch in it but the stretched bit was so true i think you force rhymes to much to be honest
vote: vexx
and dont b hatin on my vote i broke it down for you
3/6/2008 4:28:16 PM
