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chain & chi money back at it again
know where u read it it first, lol
peep game:
{Chain}
Party till the night goes, wake up when the moon’s lit At the pub pointing at its craters with my pool stick Counting ‘em in deep thought, my cranium is wounded My sanity is hurt by this mania of goon shit That short term cake is basically so useless That ‘in-the-streets’ cheddar, making me abuse this… Life of mine, a life of crime is crazily polluted With cowardice galore, no bravery included No place for the merciful where hatred is saluted Applauded by the filth too wasted to consume this… Message I’m presenting in pages of exclusives Too dense to dissect but you’ll taste it once u loop it Rewind it for the mind and play it till the truth hits Let it marinate for now ‘cause this matrix is a rubix… Cube of opportunity not created for the stupid Treasuring my pride, they’ll trade it for a new whip The rage of the urban youth, these agencies subdue it The laws dictate the system, ‘cause our nature is to lose it Over flavors of luchini like they’re paying us to do it Painful like a toothache, there’s tension in the building Patience could defuse it ‘fore I’m sentenced for a killing Making me some music in the memory of villains Catering to fools here with some Hennessey for children Selling all our souls so our men can see a million
....steal the show my nig,
{Chi Money}
As I travel this road.. it’s a hassle.. gravel n snow Tryin to keep a handle tah roll to mah castle, ya know?.. Where im king of my own life.. but when I roam right.. My soul might.. feel the evil of people wit stoned eyes Tryin tah knock me down off the throne.. lost from home But the cost alone is snitchin to the law.. across the phone I claim royalty but yet.. most these boys’ll keep me stressed Cuz they forget about honesty.. loyalty.. respect! NEGLECT.. is what the young see.. trust me.. Pops left em on their own.. sayin daddy doesnt love me Slummy goin hungry.. for food and a parent not much clothes, so.. half nude wit no shoes and embarrassed needin a lil attention.. direction.. dude, that’s apparent (a-parent) so much resistance in our exsistance to even try n fix it.. all I see are sell outs.. n everybody got they tickets! A one way route out, wit out a shout out… Think the ‘answer’.. Is puttin they ‘problems’ in the past But they never get far.. sayin the only problem was the gas.. So ima raise my voice… scream “only u can make the choice” To take the game wit out pumpin yah veins wit roids So ima keep king on the top of my throne.. my home U should to the same to keep lames away from ya grind, holmes.. N if they trespass, put em in ya castle’s made jail or they’ll ‘shake u in the end’ like a rattlesnake’s tail..
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7/19/2008 8:40:04 PM |
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Slummy goin hungry.. for food and a parent not much clothes, so.. half nude wit no shoes and embarrassed needin a lil attention.. direction.. dude, that’s apparent (a-parent)
what? ...who's fucking with that? lol
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7/20/2008 10:09:41 AM |
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damn shits ill and gettin slept on nice vocab and nice wordings on your lines
would quote but not sure which bit to quote lol props to both
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7/20/2008 11:06:37 AM |
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Applauded by the filth too wasted to consume this… Message I’m presenting in pages of exclusives Too dense to dissect but you’ll taste it once u loop it Rewind it for the mind and play it till the truth hits
deep shit chain feeling it
nice shit to money...
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7/20/2008 11:29:26 PM |
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preciate the feeds so far on this.. dont sleep on it though six lol
That short term cake is basically so useless That ‘in-the-streets’ cheddar, making me abuse this… Life of mine, a life of crime is crazily polluted With cowardice galore, no bravery included No place for the merciful where hatred is saluted Applauded by the filth too wasted to consume this… Message I’m presenting in pages of exclusives Too dense to dissect but you’ll taste it once u loop it Rewind it for the mind and play it till the truth hits Let it marinate for now ‘cause this matrix is a rubix… Cube of opportunity not created for the stupid Treasuring my pride, they’ll trade it for a new whip The rage of the urban youth, these agencies subdue it The laws dictate the system, ‘cause our nature is to lose it Over flavors of luchini like they’re paying us to do it
what?! GET OUTTA HERE! lol.. dope ass collab yet again chain..
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smh.. uppin..
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Slummy goin hungry.. for food and a parent not much clothes, so.. half nude wit no shoes and embarrassed needin a lil attention.. direction.. dude, that’s apparent (a-parent)
THIZ IS FUCKING ILL CHI!!! straight up!
Party till the night goes, wake up when the moon’s lit At the pub pointing at its craters with my pool stick Counting ‘em in deep thought, my cranium is wounded My sanity is hurt by this mania of goon shit That short term cake is basically so useless That ‘in-the-streets’ cheddar, making me abuse this… Life of mine, a life of crime is crazily polluted With cowardice galore, no bravery included No place for the merciful where hatred is saluted
Illy ^^
Patience could defuse it ‘fore I’m sentenced for a killing Making me some music in the memory of villains
True shit right thur! Ill Chain!
nice collab Fellaz!!
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7/22/2008 8:17:23 PM |
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quote posted by chain chain & chi money back at it again
know where u read it it first, lol
peep game:
{Chain}
Party till the night goes, wake up when the moon’s lit At the pub pointing at its craters with my pool stick Counting ‘em in deep thought, my cranium is wounded My sanity is hurt by this mania of goon shit That short term cake is basically so useless That ‘in-the-streets’ cheddar, making me abuse this… Life of mine, a life of crime is crazily polluted
^^nice, opener was coo that line was cool
With cowardice galore, no bravery included No place for the merciful where hatred is saluted Applauded by the filth too wasted to consume this… Message I’m presenting in pages of exclusives Too dense to dissect but you’ll taste it once u loop it Rewind it for the mind and play it till the truth hits
^like the wording nice
Let it marinate for now ‘cause this matrix is a rubix… Cube of opportunity not created for the stupid
^^again wording is nice, flow is smooth..
Treasuring my pride, they’ll trade it for a new whip The rage of the urban youth, these agencies subdue it The laws dictate the system, ‘cause our nature is to lose it Over flavors of luchini like they’re paying us to do it
^nigga usin his family name lol jp....feelin the rage line
Painful like a toothache, there’s tension in the building Patience could defuse it ‘fore I’m sentenced for a killing Making me some music in the memory of villains Catering to fools here with some Hennessey for children Selling all our souls so our men can see a million
^^nice closer, over all nice...smooth flow with some complex lines n nice rhyme scheme, feelin the matrix part ....steal the show my nig,
{Chi Money}
As I travel this road.. it’s a hassle.. gravel n snow Tryin to keep a handle tah roll to mah castle, ya know?.. Where im king of my own life.. but when I roam right.. My soul might.. feel the evil of people wit stoned eyes Tryin tah knock me down off the throne.. lost from home But the cost alone is snitchin to the law.. across the phone
i bet u be doin that lol jp, cool opener
I claim royalty but yet.. most these boys’ll keep me stressed Cuz they forget about honesty.. loyalty.. respect!
nice, could see how u wanted it to be read
NEGLECT.. is what the young see.. trust me.. Pops left em on their own.. sayin daddy doesnt love me
fuck pops........nice bar can relate
Slummy goin hungry.. for food and a parent not much clothes, so.. half nude wit no shoes and embarrassed needin a lil attention.. direction.. dude, that’s apparent (a-parent)
dope..
so much resistance in our exsistance to even try n fix it.. all I see are sell outs.. n everybody got they tickets!
could've end it here fam lol nice
A one way route out, wit out a shout out… Think the ‘answer’.. Is puttin they ‘problems’ in the past But they never get far.. sayin the only problem was the gas..
^^lol, nigga it was jp
So ima raise my voice… scream “only u can make the choice” To take the game wit out pumpin yah veins wit roids So ima keep king on the top of my throne.. my home U should to the same to keep lames away from ya grind, holmes.. N if they trespass, put em in ya castle’s made jail or they’ll ‘shake u in the end’ like a rattlesnake’s tail..
nice ending, still think u could've ended it wit the other bar but still dope
........out
overall nice, both flows were on point, not the best i've seen ya wit multis but was good, fav lines were the matrix n ticket lines, keep spittin stay dope...~1~
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