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Rhyme Reaper
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I see bishop murk you, an you still coming back tryin to talk shit on the BOSS dudes
u aint fucking with me, learn how to spell before spitting you DUMB FUCK there aint no room for wack faggots.
I Get To SMOKE-HEAT-TO-YAH-GRID Cuz My Style Killed The Jews Kinda Like What ADOLF-HITLER-DID
Im'a CHOKE-&-NEVER-FORBID, Your'a "Fag Who Pop Guns?" Im'a Call You The BROKE-BACK-MOUNTAIN-KID!!
My Bar's Are Ill-Like And YOURS-JUST-SHITTY, I Feel The Love & I Aint Talkin About VEGAS-CITY,
You Ain't Worth Shit There AINT-NO-PITY, Goe To 'Sixshot Search' Type Bitch And YOU'LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
My Knife Loves Jesus & Remains STUCK-IN-YA-CROSS, You Aint A VET Just Die & Take A FUCKING-LOSS
You Wanna FUCK-WITH-THE-BOSS?.. You Should "Guard My Prison" & I Didnt No Sixshot HAD'a-RICK-ROSS!!
Look Here Da RULE-IS-FAULTY.. You Wanna Quiet My Name? You Dont Even Have The TOOL-TO-MUTE-ME,
Sixshot This FOOL-CANT-BOOT-ME, I'll Bring "Napalm To Soldiers" Like Im Playing CALL-OF-DUTY!!
All Im'a Say Is FUCK-THIS-SLUT, Your Style Aint Even My Shoe Size.. You Just SUCK-SO-WHUT,
Da Hollows Will TUCK-N'-CUTT.. You Can "Crack Some Shells" An Still You Could'nt BUST-A-NUT!!
RIP _ZiTi_
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Goe To 'Sixshot Search' Type Bitch And YOU'LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
lol
man dont even waste ya time on him yo..lets move on to Bigger fish..i'm pretty sure i've ko'd him in the past though i'm not scrollin through my battles to find out ...
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lmfao! damn, murked this herb! good shit RR
Goe To 'Sixshot Search' Type Bitch And YOU'LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
LMFAO!
Da Hollows Will TUCK-N'-CUTT.. You Can "Crack Some Shells" An Still You Could'nt BUST-A-NUT!!
lol
g'd shit
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Da Hollows Will TUCK-N'-CUTT.. You Can "Crack Some Shells" An Still You Could'nt BUST-A-NUT!!
lol
had me laughin a bit... decent shit kid.. keep it up
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Shit waz ILLLLY ^^^
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Goe To 'Sixshot Search' Type Bitch And YOU'LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
^lol nice
but i have to say, your multis are quite terrible, some of the worst i've seen
no hate, im just bein honest [my opinion]
hardly any were matchin up in my opinion
but u had decent punches
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Rhyme Reaper
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7/27/2008 7:15:30 PM |
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chea. props on the feedback people yall be gettin my feedback to
an yo nusence fair dues now go back an check if all my ending works on the multis rhyme an count all the syllables then tell me they that terrible cuz i checked they match in all syllables an each end word rhymes.
upping
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I Get To SMOKE-HEAT-TO-YAH-GRID Cuz My Style Killed The Jews Kinda Like What ADOLF-HITLER-DID
Im'a CHOKE-&-NEVER-FORBID, Your'a "Fag Who Pop Guns?" Im'a Call You The BROKE-BACK-MOUNTAIN-KID!!
ehh, not feelin this famo...multis seemed a bit off...
My Bar's Are Ill-Like And YOURS-JUST-SHITTY, I Feel The Love & I Aint Talkin About VEGAS-CITY,
You Ain't Worth Shit There AINT-NO-PITY, Goe To 'Sixshot Search' Type Bitch And YOU'LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
weak man, weak... c'mon dogg, lemme see some hard shit!!
My Knife Loves Jesus & Remains STUCK-IN-YA-CROSS, You Aint A VET Just Die & Take A FUCKING-LOSS
You Wanna FUCK-WITH-THE-BOSS?.. You Should "Guard My Prison" & I Didnt No Sixshot HAD'a-RICK-ROSS!!
LoL...not bad...better...
Look Here Da RULE-IS-FAULTY.. You Wanna Quiet My Name? You Dont Even Have The TOOL-TO-MUTE-ME,
Sixshot This FOOL-CANT-BOOT-ME, I'll Bring "Napalm To Soldiers" Like Im Playing CALL-OF-DUTY!!
yes sir. feelin this bar here...
All Im'a Say Is FUCK-THIS-SLUT, Your Style Aint Even My Shoe Size.. You Just SUCK-SO-WHUT,
Da Hollows Will TUCK-N'-CUTT.. You Can "Crack Some Shells" An Still You Could'nt BUST-A-NUT!!
lol...not really a punch, but not bad...
overall i thought u could do better, ive read better from u fam...
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an yo nusence fair dues now go back an check if all my ending works on the multis rhyme an count all the syllables then tell me they that terrible cuz i checked they match in all syllables an each end word rhymes.
Will Do.. lol
SMOKE-HEAT-TO-YAH-GRID = 5 Syllables
AD-OLF-HIT-LER-DID = 5 Syllables
CHOKE-&-NE-VER-FOR-BID = 6 Syllables
BROKE-BACK-MOUN-TAIN-KID!! = 5 Syllables
^ first bar, already ain''t matchin & smoke, choke, broke work but with Adolf? now sure how you pronounce that
YOURS-JUST-SHITTY
VEGAS-CITY,
AINT-NO-PITY
YOU''LL-FIND-ZiTi!!
^just doesnt work at all.. ''vegas city'' & ''aint no pity'' work, but not the other two, ''you''ll'' or ''yours'' with aint? whaaat?..
STUCK-IN-YA-CROSS = 4 Syllables
FUCKING-LOSS = 3 Syllables
FUCK-WITH-THE-BOSS? = 4 Syllables
HAD''a-RICK-ROSS!! = 4 Syllables, but HAD with fuck or struck? hows that work?
RULE-IS-FAULTY
TOOL-TO-MUTE-ME
FOOL-CANT-BOOT-ME
CALL-OF-DUTY!!
^i dont think ''call'' rhymes with any of the 1st syllables and i think ''faulty'' doesnt rhyme with ''mute me'', ''boot me'', or ''duty''
The last bar worked fine
but the above ones dont
in my opinion
edit: yeah ya END words might rhyme, but doin multis the syllables gotta sound alike, u cant just have the same amount of syllables n say it works
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lol agreed^ your multies need work.. the punches are decent. but could be harder.. BUT its ziti and you dont need to go too hard against him..
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Rhyme Reaper
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7/27/2008 7:47:08 PM |
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@ nusence damn dude, this was a quick 5 bar drop, BIG fuckin deal, I dont rhyme 1st words only LAST words in multis like 90% of sixshot does,
look here for example
STUCK-IN-YA-CROSS =
FUCKING-LOSS =
FUCK-WITH-THE-BOSS?
HAD''a-RICK-ROSS!!
ROSS,BOSS,CROSS,LOSS all rhymes, i NEVER rhyme 1st letterings of the multis bout 90% of text dudes do that, cuz otherwise u gonna be here for ages rhyming WORD for WORD in 5-8 syllabe multis,
So HOP off my dick
coming from a dude who been here since 2006 an only got 10 battles
u telling me how to do my shit/
AT END OF THE DAY
long my shit rhymes an multis are there, an big DEAL
a bar with 5 syllables an 1 was off, it was some quick shit
how bout u run along an investigate some other shit, this my 2nd drop i done in over a year, an since that year i been goen I still seen YOU DO nothing
better then check this
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nusence this ur last keystyle
community.sixshot.com/read.asp?id=111123
Lol Chi? This Faggot Survived Abortion His Mother Calls Him A LUCKY-FUCKIN-DISGRACE..
Tried To Play Sense.. But-Hes-Put-In-His-Place..
How This Kid Get Girls With Sideburns Lookin Like A Pussy-Stuck-To-His-Face?!.. really though lol
LUCKY-FUCKIN-DISGRACE
But-Hes-Put-In-His-Place
Pussy-Stuck-To-His-Face
^---LUCKY, but an pussy dont rhyme?
matter fact I dont need to quote no more
GOE read rest of your verse, NONE of your beginnign Words even rhyme
an u in here telling me i cant rhyme ending words of a multi an try n play it off
but yet YOUR DOING IT TOO, get fuck out of here
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7/27/2008 2:05:40 PM