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Rhyme Reaper
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Hahah!!! Dude minute im back, you straight on my dick-
whats up you a homo faggit or something OK sixshot LETS EDUCATE some people.
I beat this dude not just in a tag match but also on a 1-on-1 in the booth get on another level kid u cant fucking with me.
fuck a youngstar (youngstargh) fuck a nusence get anew name!!
Reaper Will SHOW-YOU-THE-GLITCH.. Put NuSence In''a Body Bag Then Put Ya Lyrics & FLOW-IN-A-DITCH
Jabs? Ill Throw Low BLOWS-TO''a-SNITCH.. Then "Light Up The Candles" An Say Time To BLOW-OUT-THIS-BITCH!!
Yes! Reaper Knew The TRUTH-OF-THESE-QUEERS, I Been Raised By Killers Through Out My YOUTH,-HAD-NO-FEARS
I Got PROOF-OF-THE-PEERS, I Got 212 Battles "Across 3 Sites" U''ve Only Done ''Ten'' In The BOOTH-IN-TWO-YEARS!!
Ya Diss Was Deminished These CATS-IM-JUST-MURKING'' With Mack 10''s An The GATS-WHAT-IM-BURSTING;
Your RAPS?-WHO-THEY-HURTING.. Ur''a "Alien To Six" Because You Make NO-''SENSE''-TO-EARTHLINGS!!
Your WACK-n-YOU-AINT-PAR Your Lyrics Aint Sick! Hell Even Ya Style Is SLACK,-FUCK-WHAT-U-ARE
Im''a ATTACK-SENSE-FROM''A-FAR.. I "Beat You 6 to 3 In The Booth" Like A BLACK-HOLE-vs''a-"STAR"!!
His nickname is young ''star''
A Youngstar? Then STAY-ON-THE-MOON.. where It States R.I.P "To''a Homo Bitch" Just LAY-IN-YAH-TOMB,
Its Time To PLAY-WITH-DA-DOOM Because The ''Closest'' You''ll Get "To The Reaper" Is In The FUNERAL-ROOM!!
It''s A ''Kennedy Assassination'' When Im SNIPING-YA-TORSO, Your Style Is Not Good Im SNORING-TO-WACK-FLOW
Reaper MOURNING-EL''-CASTRO, I Got The Guns Up & Im''a Put A "Hole In Ya Face" Like A DRAWING-OF-PICASSO!!
I Aint BEATING-TO-WIN But Instead I''ll Fuck You Up And Send A Back-Kick Where Im PLOTTING-THE-SPIN
These Punchlines Straight TESTING-YA-CHIN, "NuSense So Ugly" I Can Make Out His Face On My TESTICAL-SKIN!!
R'' Getting RIFLE-RAVAGE The Trigger Finger Tip Is FATAL-SAVAGE I Can Blast''a Man With Limited PAINFUL-DAMAGE
I Got HATEFUL-PACKAGE, Lucky U Dont ''Run A Crew'' Cuz You''ll "Take Up More Dicks" Then Yah ANAL-PASSAGE!!
Fuck With Me I Got TRIADS-IN-MY-ARMY, Cuz My Punches Are "Sonning You" I Even YA''-DADS-LOOKING-AT-ME
My Rhymes ADDS-TRUTH-WHERE-DA-FACT-BE, Now Lets Get "Rid Of This NuSence" Like Using OXY-PADS-ON-ACNE!!
RIP
Next Time Ill Expose Ur Ass.
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wow.. i seen you drop 100x better than this.. fareal...
only line i felt was this one:
I Aint BEATING-TO-WIN But Instead I''ll Fuck You Up And Send A Back-Kick Where Im PLOTTING-THE-SPIN
These Punchlines Straight TESTING-YA-CHIN, "NuSense So Ugly" I Can Make Out His Face On My TESTICAL-SKIN!!
that picasso one could've been sick.. but i cant find nor do i remember ever seeing a picasso drawing of someone with a hole in the face. (fucked up faces yea.. but holes? no)
anyways.. multies wise- you had some dope ones then some that didnt match fully. flow was decent..
keep droppin tho.. no hate
pz
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Reaper Will SHOW-YOU-THE-GLITCH.. Put NuSence In''a Body Bag Then Put Ya Lyrics & FLOW-IN-A-DITCH
Jabs? Ill Throw Low BLOWS-TO''a-SNITCH.. Then "Light Up The Candles" An Say Time To BLOW-OUT-THIS-BITCH!!
hmm, not a hard opener, light up the candles?? not a great concept..
Yes! Reaper Knew The TRUTH-OF-THESE-QUEERS, I Been Raised By Killers Through Out My YOUTH,-HAD-NO-FEARS
I Got PROOF-OF-THE-PEERS, I Got 212 Battles "Across 3 Sites" U''ve Only Done ''Ten'' In The BOOTH-IN-TWO-YEARS!!
mmm i dunno.dissin someone cuz they dont battle a lot isnt that hard hitting to me, feel? besides, ive just seen this guy drop like 2 disses on the boards in the last week, so... he DOES spit, just maybe not the booth..
Ya Diss Was Deminished These CATS-IM-JUST-MURKING'' With Mack 10''s An The GATS-WHAT-IM-BURSTING;
Your RAPS?-WHO-THEY-HURTING.. Ur''a "Alien To Six" Because You Make NO-''SENSE''-TO-EARTHLINGS!!
lol, this was better...u coulda used sense in a much better way though..
Your WACK-n-YOU-AINT-PAR Your Lyrics Aint Sick! Hell Even Ya Style Is SLACK,-FUCK-WHAT-U-ARE
^filler...
Im''a ATTACK-SENSE-FROM''A-FAR.. I "Beat You 6 to 3 In The Booth" Like A BLACK-HOLE-vs''a-"STAR"!!
this multi was really off.. n the punch wasnt hard hitting...
A Youngstar? Then STAY-ON-THE-MOON.. where It States R.I.P "To''a Homo Bitch" Just LAY-IN-YAH-TOMB,
Its Time To PLAY-WITH-DA-DOOM Because The ''Closest'' You''ll Get "To The Reaper" Is In The FUNERAL-ROOM!!
not bad not bad...ur multis arent match up that well thoa.
It''s A ''Kennedy Assassination'' When Im SNIPING-YA-TORSO, Your Style Is Not Good Im SNORING-TO-WACK-FLOW
^filler..n forced...wack-flow and tor-so dont rhyme...
Reaper MOURNING-EL''-CASTRO, I Got The Guns Up & Im''a Put A "Hole In Ya Face" Like A DRAWING-OF-PICASSO!!
piccaso punches are very played...
I Aint BEATING-TO-WIN But Instead I''ll Fuck You Up And Send A Back-Kick Where Im PLOTTING-THE-SPIN
These Punchlines Straight TESTING-YA-CHIN, "NuSense So Ugly" I Can Make Out His Face On My TESTICAL-SKIN!!
not feelin this, also ur multis arent rhyming that well bro,,,
R'' Getting RIFLE-RAVAGE The Trigger Finger Tip Is FATAL-SAVAGE I Can Blast''a Man With Limited PAINFUL-DAMAGE
I Got HATEFUL-PACKAGE, Lucky U Dont ''Run A Crew'' Cuz You''ll "Take Up More Dicks" Then Yah ANAL-PASSAGE!!
no...playd..
Fuck With Me I Got TRIADS-IN-MY-ARMY, Cuz My Punches Are "Sonning You" I Even YA''-DADS-LOOKING-AT-ME
My Rhymes ADDS-TRUTH-WHERE-DA-FACT-BE, Now Lets Get "Rid Of This NuSence" Like Using OXY-PADS-ON-ACNE!!
ehhhh, kinda weak....
overall...a mediocre diss...wasnt feelin to much of this...which kinda sucks cuz with a title stating "get the body bags" i was lookin forward to seeing some insane lines, but.....i didnt... i'd work on ya multis a lil bit too fam..
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I Got 212 Battles "Across 3 Sites" U''ve Only Done ''Ten'' In The BOOTH-IN-TWO-YEARS!!
is he suposed to feel bad cuz he aint on this battlin shit as much as u?..lol..
hmmm ive seen way betta from u Reaper..didnt feel this diss..i co-sign with basilisk...
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8/3/2008 5:00:17 PM |
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This was an okay diss but just that.."okay".
Alot of your multi's did not connect and negatively changed the effect of your punchs..I would point it out..but I feel Scottjames has already done that good enough...work on your multis thats my advice
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8/3/2008 8:06:15 PM |
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co-sign....no hate...just didnt do anything for me...no punches were really hard
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8/3/2008 10:23:27 PM |
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u aint bodyin anyone with that lol
check the replies 
my fav liine was the funeral one, but like Scott said ya multis didnt match too good "funeral" didnt rhyme with any of the other multis like "lay in ya" n whatever else
but yeah, title is daft cus it wasnt really good, no hate
multis were decent some places n not good at all n not matchin in others..
but yeah.. lol @ u thinkin ya cool cus ur on THREE battles sites n have had over 212 battles.. ever seen the sunshine? get outside lol
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Reaper Will SHOW-YOU-THE-GLITCH.. Put NuSence In''a Body Bag Then Put Ya Lyrics & FLOW-IN-A-DITCH
Jabs? Ill Throw Low BLOWS-TO''a-SNITCH.. Then "Light Up The Candles" An Say Time To BLOW-OUT-THIS-BITCH!!
The punch was weak.. straight up.. and the multies flowed nicely untill the last one.
Yes! Reaper Knew The TRUTH-OF-THESE-QUEERS, I Been Raised By Killers Through Out My YOUTH,-HAD-NO-FEARS
I Got PROOF-OF-THE-PEERS, I Got 212 Battles "Across 3 Sites" U''ve Only Done ''Ten'' In The BOOTH-IN-TWO-YEARS!!
yeah feelin this.. nice shit
Ya Diss Was Deminished These CATS-IM-JUST-MURKING'' With Mack 10''s An The GATS-WHAT-IM-BURSTING;
Your RAPS?-WHO-THEY-HURTING.. Ur''a "Alien To Six" Because You Make NO-''SENSE''-TO-EARTHLINGS!!
multies was ugly!!!!! and the punch lol.. it was aight
Your WACK-n-YOU-AINT-PAR Your Lyrics Aint Sick! Hell Even Ya Style Is SLACK,-FUCK-WHAT-U-ARE
Im''a ATTACK-SENSE-FROM''A-FAR.. I "Beat You 6 to 3 In The Booth" Like A BLACK-HOLE-vs''a-"STAR"!!
wtf? come on dude this is wack..
His nickname is young ''star''
A Youngstar? Then STAY-ON-THE-MOON.. where It States R.I.P "To''a Homo Bitch" Just LAY-IN-YAH-TOMB,
Its Time To PLAY-WITH-DA-DOOM Because The ''Closest'' You''ll Get "To The Reaper" Is In The FUNERAL-ROOM!!
every multie was nice but the last one.. and the punch was basic
It''s A ''Kennedy Assassination'' When Im SNIPING-YA-TORSO, Your Style Is Not Good Im SNORING-TO-WACK-FLOW
Reaper MOURNING-EL''-CASTRO, I Got The Guns Up & Im''a Put A "Hole In Ya Face" Like A DRAWING-OF-PICASSO!!
multies dont match again.. and the punch was decennt could have been worded much better tho
I Aint BEATING-TO-WIN But Instead I''ll Fuck You Up And Send A Back-Kick Where Im PLOTTING-THE-SPIN
These Punchlines Straight TESTING-YA-CHIN, "NuSense So Ugly" I Can Make Out His Face On My TESTICAL-SKIN!!
multies are shocking.. and the punch was dumb.. lol come on dude you can do 10000000 times better
R'' Getting RIFLE-RAVAGE The Trigger Finger Tip Is FATAL-SAVAGE I Can Blast''a Man With Limited PAINFUL-DAMAGE
I Got HATEFUL-PACKAGE, Lucky U Dont ''Run A Crew'' Cuz You''ll "Take Up More Dicks" Then Yah ANAL-PASSAGE!!
ok.. ill give you this 1 coz ya accent probly all fucked up.. sso multies aight and the punch wasnt really that creative i mean.. its aight but not great
Fuck With Me I Got TRIADS-IN-MY-ARMY, Cuz My Punches Are "Sonning You" I Even YA''-DADS-LOOKING-AT-ME
My Rhymes ADDS-TRUTH-WHERE-DA-FACT-BE, Now Lets Get "Rid Of This NuSence" Like Using OXY-PADS-ON-ACNE!!
god.. this is terrible.. wtf happend to you here? lol fam.. seriously.. proof read
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8/4/2008 9:32:09 AM |
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Sup R.R. ... i break it down....
Reaper Will SHOW-YOU-THE-GLITCH.. Put NuSence In''a Body Bag Then Put Ya Lyrics & FLOW-IN-A-DITCH
Jabs? Ill Throw Low BLOWS-TO''a-SNITCH.. Then "Light Up The Candles" An Say Time To BLOW-OUT-THIS-BITCH!!
eehh....mulities had simple rap...feel me? ditch, snitch, bitch...6/10
Yes! Reaper Knew The TRUTH-OF-THESE-QUEERS, I Been Raised By Killers Through Out My YOUTH,-HAD-NO-FEARS
I Got PROOF-OF-THE-PEERS, I Got 212 Battles "Across 3 Sites" U''ve Only Done ''Ten'' In The BOOTH-IN-TWO-YEARS!!
ok. opener was solid....hard shit if its a true personal...7.4/10
Ya Diss Was Deminished These CATS-IM-JUST-MURKING'' With Mack 10''s An The GATS-WHAT-IM-BURSTING;
Your RAPS?-WHO-THEY-HURTING.. Ur''a "Alien To Six" Because You Make NO-''SENSE''-TO-EARTHLINGS!!
lol....multies were eehh...name play didnt hit hard...leave it at that.
Your WACK-n-YOU-AINT-PAR Your Lyrics Aint Sick! Hell Even Ya Style Is SLACK,-FUCK-WHAT-U-ARE
Im''a ATTACK-SENSE-FROM''A-FAR.. I "Beat You 6 to 3 In The Booth" Like A BLACK-HOLE-vs''a-"STAR"!!
i c u on tha concept..this bar was bout tha same as tha others...
A Youngstar? Then STAY-ON-THE-MOON.. where It States R.I.P "To''a Homo Bitch" Just LAY-IN-YAH-TOMB,
Its Time To PLAY-WITH-DA-DOOM Because The ''Closest'' You''ll Get "To The Reaper" Is In The FUNERAL-ROOM!!
this was ill....8/10
It''s A ''Kennedy Assassination'' When Im SNIPING-YA-TORSO, Your Style Is Not Good Im SNORING-TO-WACK-FLOW
Reaper MOURNING-EL''-CASTRO, I Got The Guns Up & Im''a Put A "Hole In Ya Face" Like A DRAWING-OF-PICASSO!!
kennedy got shot in tha dome bro...lol...this was solid..picasso shit is kinda played...
I Aint BEATING-TO-WIN But Instead I''ll Fuck You Up And Send A Back-Kick Where Im PLOTTING-THE-SPIN
These Punchlines Straight TESTING-YA-CHIN, "NuSense So Ugly" I Can Make Out His Face On My TESTICAL-SKIN!!
LMAO!!...good flow..nice punch
R'' Getting RIFLE-RAVAGE The Trigger Finger Tip Is FATAL-SAVAGE I Can Blast''a Man With Limited PAINFUL-DAMAGE
I Got HATEFUL-PACKAGE, Lucky U Dont ''Run A Crew'' Cuz You''ll "Take Up More Dicks" Then Yah ANAL-PASSAGE!!
wtf
Fuck With Me I Got TRIADS-IN-MY-ARMY, Cuz My Punches Are "Sonning You" I Even YA''-DADS-LOOKING-AT-ME
My Rhymes ADDS-TRUTH-WHERE-DA-FACT-BE, Now Lets Get "Rid Of This NuSence" Like Using OXY-PADS-ON-ACNE!!
i c what you sayin...ok.....
overall 7.3/10...had sum hott shit...flow was good...stay up
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8/4/2008 11:14:09 AM |
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mr reaper is back i see....
right basicaly it was good but not outstanding ......
some of ya wording needed flipping on some bars ya flow was cool some multies was abit filler....
but considering its been a minute since you been dropping you get the benifit of the doubt...
i fucks wid this...
keep dropping reap....
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Nice Diss Famo!!
HATERZ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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