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real life growen up in da dub gonna turn to audio for some serious showen of my real talent!!!!! Yall cat's gotta feel dis one as real as it get's
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8/24/2008 10:04:30 AM reply with quote send message to smoothsmoke

yo growen up in da field then in da dub-
moven from place to place, outta a broken home into da club-
it's been rougher dan rough maken me tougher dan tough-
people think they know me but they only knowen half a da stuff-
For real I seen more pain before ten, than most cats see in their life-
Bein chill don't exist when you bein beaten withe an inch of yo life like stuck wit a knife-
Since a lil one gettin smacked around from mom's other one da new dude a da weak-
Gettin cracked for tryen to help mom's wit da lil lil one for i learned to speak-
Never knowen what's goin on, or when she throwen on sumpin to eat-
Shit was mad crazy like da Zodiac killer standen before my feet-
Six homes n bout six guys later i'd had enough of da shit-
Plotted away outta da house-s mix before i picked up da bat and dawg took a hit-
All dis as a youngen no loven for me, my real dad abandoned me at da age a 3 month's not even years old- Dat shit's painful when your young an new to dis place, no one's loven ya lil face it's cold-
Gettin jumped by my own blood every day hurts especialy when da blood spurts-
It's fucken! sick how quick they learned to attack me like plaque be on certz-
But my heart turned colder as I grew older, beaten up all my cuz'es in bully cats in school-
I Fucken changed completely busten heads like I's a hammeren tool steada a stammerin fool-
Learned to hustle to get da paper I needed, showen muscle in sometimes they bleeded for they paid- But It was a constant job :like deliveren papers steada papers I's deliveren bags an gettin laid- Losen da only guy I ever coulda called a dad my grandpa got stricken wit cancer- A couple month's later he sickened worse an died with no answer-
So I became a complete menace to society now all these drugs im doin such a variety-
Oxycotin pills numben da pain stay'en high all day undeniably -
Robben cat's for fun could give a fuck less if they got a gun-
Hustlen an robben had me steadily stacked paper like 50's first record son-
But it was never enough no matter what I took, stole, or touched-
Wreckless as fuck doin bid's gettin out than blazen a dutch-
I had no love given so my heart hidden haten all cat's that crossed my path-
So many felt my wrath over the years like my moss'es blast-
But I had da wrong dream one dat would make you wake up in scream day or nigh-
Doin my dirt in plain sight given a fuck!! less if you died losen your necklace struggling in da fight-
Then I went from QP'S of weed to da caine g's in ball's til i had key's hidden in my walls-
Knowen death's around da way each and every day watchen my back like I's Biggie Smalls-
Til dis day I'm still dat cat you don't wanna approach unannounced-
Cuz having no remorse really counts of coarse when provoked I'll leave you cold, blue, an choked before I bounce-

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8/24/2008 10:13:33 AM reply with quote send message to smoothsmoke Post Reply

YO FOR REAL I FEEL LIKE I'VE BEEN GETTIN FUCKED OVER ON DA LAST TWO BATTLE'S AT LEAST I HAD TWO CAT,S NO SHOW MELANCHOLY BREEZE AND UNEEK. tHIERS A link dat say's if you email da admin he'll give you da win and da other cat da loss but dat shit never happened you feel me. I aint tryen to bitch and nag like a fem but fuck em dat's bullshit, but anyway im in dis new battle wit dis cat uneek im uppin for votes on dis shit once again he no showed than two days later he decided to post some pre written shit and the battle started. The only place i see where Im fucken up is my structure of my bars, shit's a lil hard to read sometimes but it's worth it I got some flow when i get my audio hooked up today or tomorrow well figa out how to save a freestyle spit and to da type a file dat will upload on dis sight, I am gonna spit some fire for real but hook a young brother out wit some votes for real

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8/24/2008 10:50:16 AM reply with quote send message to Cross Post Reply

Umm...this shit was kinda weak...real weak..Like I feel you was trying to go deep, but a deep story doesnt need to be written in such a basic format

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8/24/2008 11:13:43 AM reply with quote send message to smoothsmoke Post Reply

yo cross why don't you explain what type a format you talken about.
you mean like???????


(I spit flow for the ;ho's; n da ;bros; every local feen ;knows; my name)
(really ;get; silly ;spitt; an it really ;get's; postal lethal blow in ;dis; game)

I've choken ;bitch'es; for less than an ounce why da fuck you think I won't choke ya ;snitch; ass spouse-
I stay strapped wit cruel ;intentions; an a pistol i forgot to ;mention; that'll put holes in ya blowse-


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8/24/2008 11:20:58 AM reply with quote send message to Cross Post Reply

For starters you didn't flow like that in ya verse...seccond it was BASIC

Just an opinion


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8/24/2008 12:18:43 PM reply with quote send message to Quix Post Reply

Not bad hommie.....but yah should listen tah cross on THIS ONE!!




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8/24/2008 4:34:50 PM reply with quote send message to smoothsmoke Post Reply

well for real i signed up for dis shit top spit venom and get some praise and shit you feel me????? not on grammar scholl and shit!!! but could one of yall dat know what da fuck dude means right a verse on here and let me know how to structure it. I am gonna try and figiure out how to save audio and spit dis shit vocally and it'll sound right believe me dat shit's structured

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8/24/2008 8:12:23 PM reply with quote send message to OpTiK Post Reply

what the fuck...

fuck all this shit too much to read...when u gon turn it into audio...late winter? fuckkkk


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