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6 barz
first to 7 votes...5-0 K.O.
no biting, no stretching
Deadline for postin the verse : 27th september (ya can post earlier if ya want)
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^^nice
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Explanations…
OD – od.. I mean.. I shouldn’t have to explain that.. but in case niggas is retarded
O and J – OJ .. OJ simpson, still aint and NEVER WILL G convicted of killin that lady, lol
He’s in college.. (odi, I aint use your school so yea, lol.. I wasn’t lyin.. plus most Folk know u in school anyway)
Leg up on competition... rigor mortis is when the muscles become stiff after a person dies
Felix Faure (pronounced For, for you slow Folk) died while getting head from his assistant.. real rap.. look it up..
I’m a unbeatable pro with text.. ‘on point’ with no needle, and dope as x.. you couldn’t ‘push dope’ with the machine that leaves a kilo compressed.. C’mon ‘OD, herbs can’t kill me’ BELIEVE ME I SMOKE THE BEST!!// Everyone knows when I spit its a problem, I’m rippin his writtens.. ‘compare me to him’?, pfft. ‘there’s no sentence with O and J in it’, GIVE ME A HOLLA WHEN SIMPSON’S CONVICTED!!// This kid is a menace.. I can murder this geek without the burner no need for the thing, shit.. Jae so hot im burnin the keys with my fingers.. his flow as lame as his name, ‘Odium?’ what other words did you learn in remedial English!!// I need to be sellin whatever this nigga’s snortin.. he said I wasn’t competition for him, can u believe that simple comment.. I’m still trippin off it.. so Odi got a ‘leg up’?.. let’s see after this BITCHES CORPSE IS STIFFENED WITH RIGOR MORTIS!!// When it comes to text, no ones feelin yours, my spits is cold crakk.. and after reading what I’ve posted ‘niggaz’ll leave with their mouth open’ even Felix Faure’s assistant knows that!!// Just know that somebody should’a told this dude he couldn’t get with Jae cause its the truth n I’ll admit to say, DUDE YA LOST, but here’s some ‘food for thought’.. BANG!! your NOODLES ON A DINNER PLATE!!//
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Explanations for the bakin:
-Pre-ten=pretend=anything that is before ten 987654321 all single digits
-castrate-getting balls cut off
-peephole= people
-kids often call dudes B.. like ayo b what up.. ez believe=god=bible ..simple
-pole is another name for pipe or penis.. ez
‘Cut Ankles’ then..‘Re-Peat More wit Razors’..Ya ‘Stompin from Anger’, ‘Chop of ya Foot’ n..‘De-Feet ur Behavior’!
Creepers’..’Peep Herbs wit Lazors’..‘Not Tupac’ but ull ‘See Death Around the Corner’ lik the..’ Reapers Your Neighbor’!
ya Slumbered’..gats..’Tingle n Ridge wit Thunder’ n Gunz ‘Aint hard’ he Jus ‘Pre-Ten’(d) like..‘Single Digit Numbers’!
Urgent'''' ya not..‘Credibly Mergin’.. the..‘Lead ell Be Splurgin’..Now J ‘See-in-More Stars’ then.. ‘Celebrity Surgeons’!
..’Spittin Mystical Construed’..’Nemisis Over’,now Only way hell get the ‘Cast-Straight’ is..’Gettin Testicals Removed’!
‘Chat n Roar’..my..‘Stranglers Gat ya Hores’..-D.N.A Boys-..‘Blockin’ ya ‘Peep-hole’ like..‘Strangers at the Door’!
& ..’Frees ell Bang ya Captin’..after ya..‘Bleed n Hang from Rappin’..il put the ‘Kin to Nap’ like ..‘Rearrangin Nap-kin’!
..’Cypers Fixed wit Lines’.. that Shine’.. & Only peeps thatd ‘Steal Guns Flow’ r..‘Divers Mixed in Crime’!..
..’Survivers Hexed in Time’..Write..’Live’r Text than Mine’..he Only ‘Fucks’-wit-‘Word-Play’ in..‘Cyber Sex Online ‘!
‘Toatin da Rifle’..thats..‘Potent n Siteful’..so‘pray’.. il Have J Screamin..”Please B-Leave” like he..’Quotin the Bible’!
Get..’Yo Compass or im Smearin Ya’.. cant ‘Navigate this Storm’ so this ‘Diss-Covered’ like ..’Columbus and America’!
u ‘Spring to Bang-Cock’ like..‘Tokyo’s May Season’.. ‘Fag’ Tryna ‘Turn to Peep-Pole’ like ..‘Pinocchio Day Dreamin’ !
ez
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I’m a unbeatable pro with text.. ‘on point’ with no needle, and dope as x.. you couldn’t ‘push dope’ with the machine that leaves a kilo compressed..
weak opener...dope nameplay is played... good flow though...
C’mon ‘OD, herbs can’t kill me’ BELIEVE ME I SMOKE THE BEST!!// Everyone knows when I spit its a problem, I’m rippin his writtens.. ‘compare me to him’?, pfft. ‘there’s no sentence with O and J in it’, GIVE ME A HOLLA WHEN SIMPSON’S CONVICTED!!//
this bar took to long to get to the punchline i felt... but it was an aiight punch...
This kid is a menace.. I can murder this geek without the burner no need for the thing, shit.. Jae so hot im burnin the keys with my fingers.. his flow as lame as his name, ‘Odium?’ what other words did you learn in remedial English!!//
what did English rhyme with in this bar?? THING,SHIT and KEYS-WITH? mmm a bit of a stretch IMO... n i wasnt feelin this punch all that much...
I need to be sellin whatever this nigga’s snortin.. he said I wasn’t competition for him, can u believe that simple comment.. I’m still trippin off it.. so Odi got a ‘leg up’?.. let’s see after this BITCHES CORPSE IS STIFFENED WITH RIGOR MORTIS!!//
flow was majorly off here... punch was mediocre... im not feelin ya multis either fam... no hate though...
When it comes to text, no ones feelin yours, my spits is cold crakk.. and after reading what I’ve posted ‘niggaz’ll leave with their mouth open’ even Felix Faure’s assistant knows that!!//
this was aiight...ur flow is mad choppy which is ruining ur punches fam...
Just know that somebody should’a told this dude he couldn’t get with Jae cause its the truth n I’ll admit to say, DUDE YA LOST, but here’s some ‘food for thought’.. BANG!! your NOODLES ON A DINNER PLATE!!//
best bar of ur verse...^^ that was pretty much your only bar i was feelin though...
ODUIM::::::::::::::::::::
‘Cut Ankles’ then..‘Re-Peat More wit Razors’..Ya ‘Stompin from Anger’, ‘Chop of ya Foot’ n..‘De-Feet ur Behavior’!
Creepers’..’Peep Herbs wit Lazors’..‘Not Tupac’ but ull ‘See Death Around the Corner’ lik the..’ Reapers Your Neighbor’!
meh...was aiight.... multis were nice though... no filler either which was good.
ya Slumbered’..gats..’Tingle n Ridge wit Thunder’ n Gunz ‘Aint hard’ he Jus ‘Pre-Ten’(d) like..‘Single Digit Numbers’!
^nice...good wordplay...
Urgent'''' ya not..‘Credibly Mergin’.. the..‘Lead ell Be Splurgin’..Now J ‘See-in-More Stars’ then.. ‘Celebrity Surgeons’!
nice... good use of "see-in" i liked that ish...
..’Spittin Mystical Construed’..’Nemisis Over’,now Only way hell get the ‘Cast-Straight’ is..’Gettin Testicals Removed’!
nice wordplay again...good job OD...
‘Chat n Roar’..my..‘Stranglers Gat ya Hores’..-D.N.A Boys-..‘Blockin’ ya ‘Peep-hole’ like..‘Strangers at the Door’!
LoL yes...again. nice wordplay.... original.
& ..’Frees ell Bang ya Captin’..after ya..‘Bleed n Hang from Rappin’..il put the ‘Kin to Nap’ like ..‘Rearrangin Nap-kin’!
wasnt feelin this bro...use that napkin and wipe this bar up...LOL....j/p
..’Cypers Fixed wit Lines’.. that Shine’.. & Only peeps thatd ‘Steal Guns Flow’ r..‘Divers Mixed in Crime’!..
..’Survivers Hexed in Time’..Write..’Live’r Text than Mine’..he Only ‘Fucks’-wit-‘Word-Play’ in..‘Cyber Sex Online ‘!
^good. my fav bar so far... though was still kinda ehh...... nice multis...
‘Toatin da Rifle’..thats..‘Potent n Siteful’..so‘pray’.. il Have J Screamin..”Please B-Leave” like he..’Quotin the Bible’!
ehhhhh.... simple. but was juss aiight.. i liked ur multis here though...
Get..’Yo Compass or im Smearin Ya’.. cant ‘Navigate this Storm’ so this ‘Diss-Covered’ like ..’Columbus and America’!
^yes...thats the best bar so far... this battles over now....
u ‘Spring to Bang-Cock’ like..‘Tokyo’s May Season’.. ‘Fag’ Tryna ‘Turn to Peep-Pole’ like ..‘Pinocchio Day Dreamin’ !
LoL @ PEEP POLE... this is nice. woulda been better if ya hadnt already used a people wordplay already in this verse....
overall: OD took this pretty easily...though ive seen OD come 10x harder..
J Gunz..u was aiiight. i think u could come harder from what ive read on your previous battles in the tourny...
VOTE: ODIUM...
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Ok..
GUNZ..
I’m a unbeatable pro with text.. ‘on point’ with no needle, and dope as x.. you couldn’t ‘push dope’ with the machine that leaves a kilo compressed.. C’mon ‘OD, herbs can’t kill me’ BELIEVE ME I SMOKE THE BEST!!//
^^ not feelin it..some ok concepts, but it wasn't worded good.. like u used 'dope' back to back.. that sounded off to me..
Everyone knows when I spit its a problem, I’m rippin his writtens.. ‘compare me to him’?, pfft. ‘there’s no sentence with O and J in it’, GIVE ME A HOLLA WHEN SIMPSON’S CONVICTED!!//
^^ i liked this concept.. nice idea wit the punch.. ur best line
This kid is a menace.. I can murder this geek without the burner no need for the thing, shit.. Jae so hot im burnin the keys with my fingers.. his flow as lame as his name, ‘Odium?’ what other words did you learn in remedial English!!//
^^ flow seemed real off.. idk i wasn't feelin this line at all.. i see that 'thing shit' rhymes wit 'english' but there's alota shit in between that seems off..
I need to be sellin whatever this nigga’s snortin.. he said I wasn’t competition for him, can u believe that simple comment.. I’m still trippin off it.. so Odi got a ‘leg up’?.. let’s see after this BITCHES CORPSE IS STIFFENED WITH RIGOR MORTIS!!//
^^ I don't like this one either.. idk, just not really hittin imo..
When it comes to text, no ones feelin yours, my spits is cold crakk.. and after reading what I’ve posted ‘niggaz’ll leave with their mouth open’ even Felix Faure’s assistant knows that!!//
^^ concept was aite, but the way it was worded doesn't really do it for me..
Just know that somebody should’a told this dude he couldn’t get with Jae cause its the truth n I’ll admit to say, DUDE YA LOST, but here’s some ‘food for thought’.. BANG!! your NOODLES ON A DINNER PLATE!!//
^^ not bad.. not great.. the noodle punch is so so
ODIUM..
Cut Ankles’ then..‘Re-Peat More wit Razors’..Ya ‘Stompin from Anger’, ‘Chop of ya Foot’ n..‘De-Feet ur Behavior’!
Creepers’..’Peep Herbs wit Lazors’..‘Not Tupac’ but ull ‘See Death Around the Corner’ lik the..’ Reapers Your Neighbor’!
^^ the 'de-feet' concept is super played.. the reaper punch was average.. good flow though..
ya Slumbered’..gats..’Tingle n Ridge wit Thunder’ n Gunz ‘Aint hard’ he Jus ‘Pre-Ten’(d) like..‘Single Digit Numbers’!
Urgent'''' ya not..‘Credibly Mergin’.. the..‘Lead ell Be Splurgin’..Now J ‘See-in-More Stars’ then.. ‘Celebrity Surgeons’!
^^ 'ridge wit thunder'?? not sure what ridge means there.. i like the 'pre ten' wordplay though.. very creative.. 'celeb surgeon' punch was also dope.. ur best bar
..’Spittin Mystical Construed’..’Nemisis Over’,now Only way hell get the ‘Cast-Straight’ is..’Gettin Testicals Removed’!
‘Chat n Roar’..my..‘Stranglers Gat ya Hores’..-D.N.A Boys-..‘Blockin’ ya ‘Peep-hole’ like..‘Strangers at the Door’!
^^ Good bar.. the wordplay is hittin right now..
& ..’Frees ell Bang ya Captin’..after ya..‘Bleed n Hang from Rappin’..il put the ‘Kin to Nap’ like ..‘Rearrangin Nap-kin’!
..’Cypers Fixed wit Lines’.. that Shine’.. & Only peeps thatd ‘Steal Guns Flow’ r..‘Divers Mixed in Crime’!..
^^ not feelin it.. punches not hittin..
..’Survivers Hexed in Time’..Write..’Live’r Text than Mine’..he Only ‘Fucks’-wit-‘Word-Play’ in..‘Cyber Sex Online ‘!
‘Toatin da Rifle’..thats..‘Potent n Siteful’..so‘pray’.. il Have J Screamin..”Please B-Leave” like he..’Quotin the Bible’!
^^ didn't like this bar either.. 'cyber sex' punch is played.. 'bible' punch was very so so..
Get..’Yo Compass or im Smearin Ya’.. cant ‘Navigate this Storm’ so this ‘Diss-Covered’ like ..’Columbus and America’!
u ‘Spring to Bang-Cock’ like..‘Tokyo’s May Season’.. ‘Fag’ Tryna ‘Turn to Peep-Pole’ like ..‘Pinocchio Day Dreamin’ !
^^ columbus punch was good.. like u told me wit multis tho.. 'smearin ya' and 'america'..?? a little off maybe.. n then u played off 'people' again so i wasn't really feelin that..
OVERALL:
Gunz.. i feel like u took this one off.. ur other battles were a lot better.. it seemed like u rushed it.. idk, i just didn't like ur flow or punches really.. a good concept here n there but that was it.. no hate, just wasn't feelin the verse..
Odium.. decent verse.. u went hard wit the wordplay.. real hard.. some original concepts.. also some played concepts.. that 'de-feet' shit especially.. i also think that u have a good vocab, but u be stretchin sometimes to the point where the word doesn't really fit.. unless u got extra definitions idk about lol.. like the 'ridge wit thunder' thing..
Odium had a stronger verse.. better flow, punches, wordplay..
VOTE: ODIUM
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or like the boot in italy concept^^^ rofl... word
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ima vote on this 2morrow...
seems like a good battle
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or like the boot in italy concept^^^ rofl... word
i guess whats played really depends on who's reading.. i never heard the boot/sicily concept before so to me it was original.. i guess its been used on six before cuz a couple of yall said it was played.. just like u prolly thought the de-feet concept was original cuz u may not have seen it before.. but that is a punch i've seen/heard almost more then any other punch..
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‘there’s no sentence with O and J in it’, GIVE ME A HOLLA WHEN SIMPSON’S CONVICTED!!/
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