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Fuckin around.... tryin to get back up...
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12/26/2008 5:12:25 PM reply with quote send message to PureVenom

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the king blaster i sling cash and spleen slash him and swing past em to bring passion like teen matchups

just a lil warmup....

Imagine arduous dreams trapped in marvelous schemes, smashed by guarded regimes, cash is guarded by fiends, wrapped in charts and machines... but past the heart of a teen - cached - a martyr unseen - yo i''m hard to receive like dogs tossed by marines

lol...www.livenews.com.au/MultimediaPopUp.aspx?id=46827&cat=10 its kinda old tho

aight aight just keep fuckin around i guess, tryna get my fire back

aight yo....
my eyes i do keep on the prizes i seek While I "levy cougars" - you get "little behind", like a priest im "Freddy Kruger" with "heavy rugers" - you die if you sleep

gimme summ

free agent, by the way, pick me up

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12/26/2008 5:14:50 PM reply with quote send message to oDiUm Post Reply

your flow was cool... looks like your tryin a little hard tho kid.. work on the punches some .. make your whole line relate to the punch.. word

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12/26/2008 5:23:04 PM reply with quote send message to PureVenom Post Reply

appreciate the feed, just fuckin around tryin to increase complexity, playin with different rhyme schemes and such lol

i'll go kruger wit a ruger on your asses if you sleep, six! angry


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12/28/2008 5:50:12 PM reply with quote send message to LuiDimar Post Reply

Close this thread - answered feedback :L

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12/28/2008 5:50:51 PM reply with quote send message to LuiDimar Post Reply

Good flow though, PureVenom.

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12/28/2008 6:21:36 PM reply with quote send message to Godzilla Post Reply

good flow and multi's.. punches didn't really hit though. Also, while the multis and the flow were good, it was basically nonsense that rhymed and sounded good lol (aka "forced multi's"). Try to keep a theme or express a complete thought... try to make sure the multi's are linked together by a common theme

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