imma breast feed ya'll peeps this week...im in a giving mood....since all ya;ll bastards been crying over spilled milk....ya'll say you ain't gettin enough feed on ya drops...soo...come on in and drop me something and i'll get atcha....kinda way for me to say..."I FEED THA CHILDREN"
so...rulez is....
drop me a piece and imma cut it up and give the most honest feed i can give....
can be keys, frees, audios, graphix, poetry, songs....even that english paper u got due on monday!
lol....bent...thanks for following rules...dem are titties on da title...
k first of all...Tonight by bigbent
lol...nice hook.....nice beat...
Lycs: 1st verse- rode the beat, iffy bout that voice...lol...but nice dem lycs are nice but mediocre....but hey aren't all sex/love songs?
2nd verse (bent)-flow is a bit off in the opening...but its almost like acapella...but i like ya lycs a bit more...a little less mediocre. (walks on the jersey shore...hmmm..nice)
overall: both ya'll kept it different....nice imagery...(got me warm...key word "warm" not hot...lol)
Audio Quality: It hink a majority of sixshot audio heads got this problem too..i know i do....but ya verse is a slightly higher than the vol of the beat....but then it levels off in the end.....first verse was fine...
Your verse...i take it u dont have a condenser cuz it sort of sounds like ur talkin on a bull horn....lol..its got that crackling and a bit of poppin off in the background(like a record player)...unless thats what u were going for. This kinda made the verse a bit off...like it didn't belong....maybe if u guys softened out the vocals everything would have blended well.
catchy hook...i think i like it.....
7.8/10....i don't like to rate things but i think i should start.
me and you need to collab on something like this....lol....
1/22/2009 7:04:39 PM
