u got a good voice and shit but the girl on the chorus is whack u dono wtf she is sayin an has a bad voice
ur flow is good at points but when u come to the end of some of your bars you just pause for no reason and that ruins the flow..i aint gonna front u sound good on a track you just gotta polish up ur shit...and u'd be straight...keep doin u...props
Aite thanks for some truthful feed man.. and The chick she was nervous... She never sang in a booth before and She never took like chorus or whatever in school...
- the beat is good - your flow is good, but like Erattik15 said you def need to be aware of when you pause and be more in control. The second verse you were a bit off. - The girl isn't awful....but she ain't good on this particular track. She needs more vocal training and the chorus isn't that great so that is just making a bad situation worse. You also can't understand her and that could be a more of a how it was recorded more than anything else.
I would like to see your voice on another track before I make a full assessment.
5/30/2009 1:31:17 AM
