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6/8/2009 8:47:33 PM
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more like a gram...keystyle..
guys are weak as shit, just burn n flames n pass cos u try `breesing` ill `hurricane` ur ass im sure to aim n blast, emerge to reign the vast.. insurgance tamed n trashed, nuttin pure n plain but masked thru the earth its lame but has..to be blurred n blamed but ask... wat to search when at church n chained when grasped im a jerk but at work im trained n tasked on how to... splurt insane to dash hope n jerks dat claim they class...
listen yall crazy hyped im not the crazy type blame it on da lazy mic or wat da ladies like cos listen lately right... met ur mom at the `psyce ward` she was `crazy nice` not the lady type but fuck it, she hazy so i got laid that night would have `left`but she paid me `right`! plus i raid the mic on some invasion type leave u slayed n sliced, im brave im bright u got a `heavy load` but u dazed n light im `stone cold literature` engrave ya life like dem graves at night ghost like, saying `oh christ` day n nite.....
rappers nowdays grindin for dem checks n beats half steppin, dem wack cretins dun forget the streets done forgot the lease on them popping beats not stoppin, imma pop nottin, cos u nottin geeks i was on the block all crazy, but the ox all lazy cos i spent 4 days on the yaught, takin shots, all hazy my head all mixed up, tryna deal wit later first until that eighter burst, i can father u fuckeers but id have to go thru labour first n fuck thee haters, they just some hating jerks i only signed a deeal, so i dont got no paperwork
nice drop. verse needed to be a lil bit brighter. your vocab was good as fuck but you should have used that to your advantage. what i mean by that is..... you should have made the verse a little more exciting. its just constructive criticism. we all about elevating boss.
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