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10/24/2009 9:58:53 AM
wassup y'all
been workin on my 1st mixtape, and am proud of it so far shit's coming along nicely will post it on here when done, the tracks i make now ain't like any other of the shit i done before (ability wise) shit is str8 ill now as a standard, so yo check my new shit out n lemme know whatcha think, there's way more clarity than my other tracks but i put up the lyrics anyway
uh 92pacalypse tha birth of Tha Dark Prince the beginning of the end the end of all pretense tha time, hoe for you to make amends pay ya respects genuine article I take and amend go bring all ye mens shred 'em to particles mix 'em with drugs inda dens of tha tenz thugs in a benz, we onda battlefield you fucks just watch onda bench my crew entrenched, come up all o' asudden from tha trench behead you with a fuckin wrench this unwritten in time's tense thats why I insurrect, this spell spells the end
(chorus)
this music infused for fuses to let loose n abuse whilst in a soothed mood ridin through hoods ignitin fires strikin liars they anticipatin while we makin their wives desires come true | spittin pious through wires they got tha phone tapped, wired, but I'm remote you fag, wireless | tirelessly onda tha grind assignin men to provide them with tha high n if they decline it's an eye for an eye to recline n stay inclined | gunmen, we refine, thugs then, we define n scribe it in our designs livin with tha rebels, sleepin with tha devils but got an empire state of mind | align foes one side, beside hoes aside, fuck them all both in different kinds, hoes inda back foes inda trunk of our rides | we breakthrough confinement, keep these lytiz on reassignment, bring war veterans outta retirement, n better all of 'em with co-signment | shredder the rest of 'em especially tha pest gettin inda way of tha chedder, cock tha berettas, stop their endeavors, possum we never they gossip?? we cross 'em out on letters, n all that describes my base, provides tha foundation for these rhymes these lines forever now world embrace
(chorus)
you can't fuck with me bru, I'll shove ya back up ya mother's womb, thatz my word dogg take the world before they shove me in a fuckin tomb they presume you tha illest till they heard this, assumed you tha realist but now ya fear this, so I resume consumin you with this ill shit | fumin tha illest scriptures, blooming ya daughters in ta bitches, doomed slaughtering y'all snitches told ya im good inda fuckin kitchen stuff you alive into tha frige n, microwave y'all fuckin kittens, sick coz tired of ya styles all fuckin bitten, so gotz ta bring out tha mask n mittens y'all all about talk im 'bout glock trigger fiddlin, acute with accuracy i never stop im never missin, piss coz ya lyrics' ain't worth pieces of shit n mines' distilled they glisten, blissful though shit's still like pistols, listen ta visions depicted from what tha prince envisioned in killins believe it, expose you like cleavage, people don't know you like secrets, n you tryna blow mind you I only take bitches, tha homie roll wit killaz, you don't know me phony you are what we call a bitch's main fuckin feature
when people say they''re ill etc, it always reminds me of the Joe Budden line:
"now rap dudes suck they own pee hole// the wacker the music the bigger the ego"
thats kinda the case here.. the song is far from "ill".. dont know if its my speakers, or if the quality is actually as terrible as it sounds.. n i couldnt hear the chorus at all? but yeah, needs a lot of improvement quality wise, and ya style is.. rushed? idk, i didn''t like it much really
"bigger the ego" nah trust me man I ain't one of those
shit was rushed for this particular track, coz well I guess I wrote to it all wrong, ended up havin ta squeeze all the bars in, anywayz yeah you right 'bout the quality, im just no good at mixin and that shit but im workin on it, i listened to it on the headphones it sounded ayt but can't say the same on speakerz, but yo I appreciate the honesty, 1
yeah, i didnt really direct that at you lol just you were sayin its ill etc n it turned out not to be soo i thought you might be a bit deluded by ya own music.. lol
but yeah, if you wrote to the beat better n got the flow right.. with better quality, it'd be a big improvement
10/24/2009 9:58:53 AM
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