Posts: 27
Sex: male
Join Date: Nov,
2004
Location:
retired
12/8/2004 2:37:03 AM
I got a beat from creepyfingers and cut it up a little bit, threw some lyrics in, and came up with this song....the more feedback the better, so please feel free to tell me how good or bad that it is. web.ics.purdue.edu/~bpivar/ed.mp3
LMFAO..........WOW!!!!! KILLER LINES EXAMPLE: "WHAT THE FRICK" LMFAO!!!!!! AND "1 DAY HE GOT COUGHT SMOKIN HERB, HE NEVER THOUGHT HE'D GET COUGHT IN A SUBERB"
aight.....well.......it wasn't the worst i ever heard.....but your flow needs serious work coz it sounds like ur just talkin really...and the lyrics, well...for ur first audio it was aight...but really work on the flow, and get some emotion in there instead of just reading...a good way to do this is memorize ur verse....
12/8/2004 2:37:03 AM
