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AzIaNAsSaSsIn
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Uhmmm lol we don’t have a title… Here’s the choices…take ur pick
Love & Pain Dont Speak For Words
Underestimation Of Real Love
Vengeance Of Love
Loves Version, In The Demoms Eye
Forbiddon To Live Life
Death Greets Cupid
Life sucks…
DeEp shit right here…
…Pariah…
..I Praise-My-Enemie For Whom He Equals Pariahs Path Will Phaze-The-Misery..
..Ever Since A Kid, I'd Gaze-The-Cowardly Ready To Die On The Days-Of-My-Bury..
..Lost A Mother n Brother On Who I Loved To Death..I'll Miss Ya'..
..Cryed n Heard Ya Last Breath So See Ya'.. Cause All This Pain Its A Trauma..
..So I Wished 2 Forget It All, The Voices I Still Hear.. "Your Gonna Be Def From Amnesia.."
..I Screamed The-3-Symbols "R.I.P.", As-He-Stumbles Feelin The 'Fresh Earth' ..'Mommey-He-Mumbles'..
..Brother.. 'He-Trembles'.. "Werent God All Love An Holy?..Why You..Why Her?" The Good Won I Read The Bibles..
..Only My Dad And I, Lord I Hated You Over The Years, Storming Through Blood.. I Stood In Rain Of Tears..
..The "Keeper Of All Peers" The Father Figure.. Now I Wanna Fight You As The Son On Whom You Forced Tha Pain n Fears..
..You Bitch!! Gon Left Me-A-'Lone, Even The Most Forgotten See-Me-Grown.. Searching The Love..Left To Roam..
..I Gotta Life-To-Bed, The Blood Of Jesus To Strife-The-Red Reviving The Pheonix While Im Left Wid'a Knife-To-Bled..
..As I Heard "Nothing Can Stop You..This World Is Yours She Said", I Muttered..Nothing Stopping Me But The 'Two' In My Head..
..So In Life Theres More To It, Whens Its All Said n Done..
..When The Last Chapter In The Verse Called For The Gun..
~Mother.. Your Only Forgotten Son~
Azian
{NOTE: This is a poem/Key…I wrote it more for me than for y’all, but feedback is welcome…}
Seventeen, living a life considered obsene, addicted to morphine
My momma was seen raped and left to die in a ravine
9 months later she gave birth at midnight, fever causing the loss of her eyesight
Thirteen days later despite the doctor’s promise, she died, the end to her long fight
That’s when my father began the abuse every night booze and drug misuse led to my rescue
Grandpa was forced to choose, choosin ta lose, lef me at the house of his nephew
Flown to the U.S. on my own, meeting my foster parents- felt like I was on a throne
Guess I was destined to be alone, cuz momma killed herself, blown off by daddy-jus another unknown
At the age of four, I swore, I’d never love anyone any more,
cuz when it rains, it’s a fuckin downpour and even at that age, I knew I had my life figured out for sure
I had nothing in my life, and everything I had I lost It, There was nuffin left for me, My luck was exhausted
I was a misfit, split from my family, feelin unfit and for momma’s death I was the culprit
Nothin like the presence of two loving parents to dissolve past judgements, and confront the silence
Unfortunately the absence left me in emotional fragments with ailments clearly remnant
I thought I knew my fate, fuckin ridiculous, by the age of eight I thought it was too late
Felt like an inmate, with no escape, like life was hell and I could relate
With so much hate I was ready to give up, and join my momma at heaven’s gate
Six months later I was given a family, treated me lovingly, gave me opportunity, finally feeling carefree
I remember for the first time feeling pretty and classy, life was no longer an enemy, I could take on anything…
Luck was finally going my way, six days before I turned thirteen my cousin, Curt, came to stay
To my dismay, On my birthday he took me away -we drove to his house and parked on his driveway
I remember perfectly, he started touching me, I could smell the Brandy and feel him breathing deeply
I remember painfully trying to flee, but I wasn’t that lucky, and after he was done I felt so dirty as I begged for mercy
When I returned home I wanted to die, For two years, every night I would cry, when momma asked why, I would lie, fearing that Curt was always nearby
Time has dragged on, Curt’s gone, and I guess I’ve learned making it through the night brings a new dawn
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Tight Verse Azian, Uppin This Real Shit..
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3/13/2005 6:25:42 AM |
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Both of ya'llz flows are hard...I'm really feelin where ya'll comin from...stay up...
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3/13/2005 6:43:12 AM |
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deep,nice from both,i really felt it. I prefered pariah's a little bit more because it was complex but azassian's was nice and probably had the betta concept out of the two. That was some real depressin shit  lol, uppin
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3/13/2005 7:09:20 AM |
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tight bro
 
The Souljah Assassins
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iNvIzIbLe2rAdAr!
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3/13/2005 7:47:13 AM |
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Got Hot Talent
Gonna Read It Properly Again Later, Keep That Shit Up Homie!!!!!
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Alter E-goe
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3/13/2005 7:59:19 AM |
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.......nice shyt..... i think i felt azian'z verse/poem a little more.....pariah'z shyt wuz deep tho....... gud shyt....
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3/13/2005 8:08:56 AM |
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NICE!!! KEEP IT UP
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3/13/2005 9:45:37 AM |
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damn
that's some real and deep shit
from both of ya'll
i can feel the pain
really nice
keep it coming ya'll
A Blunted Genius
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3/13/2005 10:41:01 AM |
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Ayo That Was Real Nice Deep I Felt EVer Line I lIke Poetic Type Like This On SUm real Life Ish Sorry Bout Both Ya Problems If Ya Need Supa Hola ATcha Nigguh............I Loved The POetry Nice Keep Droppin Pariah And Azian Azian Loved This Line:
I’ve learned making it through the night brings a new dawn
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3/13/2005 12:58:18 PM |
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both fine verses , i'm feelin ya
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