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JLOK344
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3/17/2006 7:15:39 PM reply with quote send message to JLOK344

Such intensity infuriating while i straggle
Guys annoyance where ever i turn but continue to wobble
His misconceptions, saying i fucked his girl
Now my worlds spinning as if its awhirl
While he comes to my face my hands turn to a fist
Saying everyday he waits long for her cause we set up a tryst
Can't you resist, learn how to desist
Tell me one thing... how many times you kissed?
So my frown turns to a smile, i laugh at this kid
I look into his eyes and say that this is ridiculous
You're worthless and your toughness doesn't work
Hit me in the face... shit's about to get berserk
He laughs as if it were a joke but it quickly turns to a frown
His plan didn't work, he was letdown
He walks away quickly, not turning around
HAHA, my day was great, whats going to happen next?






princess12
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3/17/2006 10:49:39 PM reply with quote send message to princess12 Post Reply

well papi it's a 6/10 for me, its like a story turned into a freestyle, yo u need more peepz to let u in on what u need help on, and just keep doing ya thang, u'll get better
 

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SHOWSTOPPER
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3/17/2006 10:59:06 PM reply with quote send message to SHOWSTOPPER Post Reply

it was tight
 
yeah yeah DETROIT is in the buildin



_Kastr0_
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3/17/2006 11:01:01 PM reply with quote send message to _Kastr0_ Post Reply

yeah BouT aS TiGHt as a LooSe ScReWlaugh :D
 


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NCKitty03
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3/17/2006 11:07:57 PM reply with quote send message to NCKitty03 Post Reply

Nice, nice

a little more practice and you will be a rookie!!!

lol..j/p

but that was nice 7/10
 
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Craftz
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3/18/2006 8:57:28 AM reply with quote send message to Craftz Post Reply

needs work, nice start 6/10



Fuck wit me, ull like it wink ;)



Murd3r Mind3d
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3/18/2006 9:53:42 AM reply with quote send message to Murd3r Mind3d Post Reply

hahah 5.5/10 needs alot of work
 




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