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feedbak plz... club rap- prolly whack but i tried
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JLOK344
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3/20/2006 8:44:39 PM reply with quote send message to JLOK344

Jump Jump... the party get started and the asses get jumpin
Stick 2 one spot and do the grindin -n- bumpin
Do more than suttin... start ya smilin and huggin
Cuz the shit ain't over so lets all start buggin

We got all night long, so do wuts best
Women tuch ya chest, all guys request
Don't be depressed, Jus act possessed
Like ya last day livin, act wild and don't rest

While the women lookin fine all around tha club
Hot girls dancin wit the ragedy ol' scrubs
Drivin fuked up cars wit whack ass dubs
Jus lookin plain ol flub

Shits so crazy, hot in the place
Girls breakin baks, guys needin an ankle brace
Give 'em some space, get off his case
You jus broke'em tryna go someplace

Erry1 o so tired... and the shit jus started
Don't act retarded, over again lets start it
I no ur torrid, jus a bit rugged
But the night ain't over till this place is humid

Native_Honey
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3/20/2006 8:50:00 PM reply with quote send message to Native_Honey Post Reply

hahahha...funny...the delivery could've been better....if you made the flow sound a lil better with better vocab then..i wouldve bounced to it....nice though...








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3/20/2006 10:01:14 PM reply with quote send message to fLaJoJo Post Reply

GGGETTTT CCCRRRUUUUNNNKKKKKK
 






Fore.Chun
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3/20/2006 11:26:12 PM reply with quote send message to Fore.Chun Post Reply

Wow - you and the other 1,000,000 dudes writing shit like this should be banned from hip hop.
 







BlackGloves
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3/20/2006 11:29:49 PM reply with quote send message to BlackGloves Post Reply

^^^^agreed same ole shit notin new it aint doin much for me
 






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3/21/2006 1:28:41 AM reply with quote send message to Craftz Post Reply

that was sum mike jones shit rite thurr.. sad :(



Fuck wit me, ull like it wink ;)



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