Favorite MC's:
2Pac, Do Or Die, DMX, B.I.G., Warren G, etc.
6/28/2006 7:24:52 AM
Somethin quick i wrote up at like 4 in da mornin...read n' den plz leave some feed...
So many people roun' me, bring'n actions so drastic/ Der reactions, so damn sarcastic, but i jus sit star cast'n/ Track'n fast, in da path of da pact, dat impact'n/ No more time ta relax, nows da time ta think n' act fast, n' fuck da past/ Kno my life wont last, each day is so vast, how slow da time pass/ Some wit my image, try'n ta mold n' cast/ Others jus hate, n' call out "white trash"/ Up ta me ta seize my fate, before a virus, make it crash/ Minus da fact, i got my own fam, come'n out wit words dat lash n' leave rash/ But im a soldier n' heal, gone make sho, no more pain i feel/ I now see wats real, so time ta put it on track, n' make a deal/ Rite now, back-pack'n down da road ta no-where, wit no fear/ Mind clear of clarity, walk strong in prosperity/ Rhymes hystericaly, purely, turn'n lyrically, ill/ Dis feel'n as it flow, give me chills of thrill/ Gone make bitches keel, dats my text's apeal/ No need ta send a hex, bring teks, or steal/ Cuz da natural amend'n of me send'n dese lines, bend ya at will/ Like sex, i pleasure but also can kill, neva measure da field/ No shield, don't heild, always will'n ta cross yield/ Pressure on my back heel, as i get pushed back for lack of skillz/ But i aint here ta make bills, only ta be heard n' respected/ All my life, been rejected, my presence, a neglection/ Feel like evryones eyez on me, disect'n evry section/ Wen in fact, dey infect'n, get'n voted against, like im in an election/ N' my life, i contstantly question, evry second, never chance for second guess'n/ Jus go at wit my best, n' in da end it depend, maybe learn a lesson/ My soulz neva put ta rest, always on da defensive, cuz all da incentives/ Vest is, sit'n aside, still to abide, wait'n for other restless, ta test dis, neva see me sigh/ Set up like a chess mess, chex out at da front desk/ Murdered wit much less, n' where i stand, its said/ More talk come'n out bout me, den moun's of bitches in bed/ Dis lyracist, come ta infect, like lead/ Tread ya head, wit steady fed flow, dat dreads, neva fleds/ Now keys ima continue ta pursue, like my pen, as its ink imbeds, on da pages of mead/
...all feed is appreciated...thanks for time tak'n ta read dis...
Nice Flow queenie Truth , Also smooth transition from line to line, nice right thurr, like some of ya concepts, it would be even nicer if ya put it on audio, I think the middle of ya key was the strongest, it was felt more, and keep ya head up
Cheap Reppin E.S To the Fulllest, U gon make a good Leader
thanks man^^^appreciate ya feed ...i was gone wait ta put it on audio but figured i'd see wat ppl think of it as a text...gone do da audio still, jus look'n fa feed ta fix it up n' shit n' ima prob add a hook to it also....
Uppin^^^for more views n' feed...all feed appreciated...
damn i aint get no feed on dis shit really n' made audio but aye let me kno if shuld redo dis audio n' place dif beat n' shit..but yea, im tryna get shit strait rite now but gone get dem new audios out cuz shit get'n ill, real tlk manez...evryone stay up n' be safe...1.
6/28/2006 7:24:52 AM
