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rippa
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Nas, Talib Kweli, tHe PrOpHeT
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I'm Suffering, cuz I know, only Time Can Heal These Wounds On My Heart
But The Sooner I Start, I can cope with the fact That Our Rooms Are Apart
Cuz My Emotions keep changing with every second that passes
But with every second that passes, I wish for the seconds to go faster
I Keep lookin for the light in the midst of this darkness,
when the slits r the sharpest
I get down on my knees and put my fists 2 the carpet
And I Pray to God, to make the Pain go away neva come back
Damn, If knew love felt like this, I'd have neva done that
I Did Plenty of things wrong, and I'm sorry for all of it
4 The Largest & Smallest Fit,
I'm Taking My Pride and I'm Swallowing All of it
But I'm moving on now, cuz I'm fightin for life
Usin my blood for the ink and a Knife when I write
No longer walkin with my wife on the right, just my son on the left
But now I'm not walkin, cuz I'm runnin from death
So I take my thumb off the gun and my tongue off the rest
I won't Let Death take Me, Dawg I'm Not Done with my Breath
I use these words for my therapy and clarity, I Don't care if your fair to me
But don't mistake these words for weakness Dawg, I don't dare you stare at me
Cuz Even though I'm Hurt, I'm a Man & I Ride with my Pride
I'll Neva Give Up, I keep my eye on the prize
The Only difference now... Is I'm Dyin Inside!!!
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Raw Skillz
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 7/17/2006 10:06:23 PM |
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'm Taking My Pride and I'm Swallowing All of it
But I'm moving on now, cuz I'm fightin for life
Usin my blood for the ink and a Knife when I write
u back duke?
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3d
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7/17/2006 10:07:16 PM |
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Ill
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the chef 69
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7/17/2006 10:18:02 PM |
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damn thats fuckin ill homie
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supaman
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7/17/2006 10:23:36 PM |
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posted by rippa
I'm Suffering, cuz I know, only Time Can Heal These Wounds On My Heart
But The Sooner I Start, I can cope with the fact That Our Rooms Are Apart
Cuz My Emotions keep changing with every second that passes
But with every second that passes, I wish for the seconds to go faster
I Keep lookin for the light in the midst of this darkness,
when the slits r the sharpest
I get down on my knees and put my fists 2 the carpet
..Imagery Is Amzing...Very Emotional
And I Pray to God, to make the Pain go away neva come back
Damn, If knew love felt like this, I'd have neva done that
I Did Plenty of things wrong, and I'm sorry for all of it
4 The Largest & Smallest Fit,
I'm Taking My Pride and I'm Swallowing All of it
But I'm moving on now, cuz I'm fightin for life
Usin my blood for the ink and a Knife when I write
No longer walkin with my wife on the right, just my son on the left
But now I'm not walkin, cuz I'm runnin from death
So I take my thumb off the gun and my tongue off the rest
I won't Let Death take Me, Dawg I'm Not Done with my Breath
Once MOre Ya Imagery Is CRazy
Along With The Flow ..EMotions Runnin Over
I use these words for my therapy and clarity, I Don't care if your fair to me
But don't mistake these words for weakness Dawg, I don't dare you stare at me
Cuz Even though I'm Hurt, I'm a Man & I Ride with my Pride
I'll Neva Give Up, I keep my eye on the prize
The Only difference now... Is I'm Dyin Inside!!!
8.9/10
Nice Drop The flow Was Off The Charts
Imagery And EMotion Were Devstating
Nice DRop Rippa UPPPPPPPPPPPPP
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Rhyme Reaper
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7/17/2006 10:39:07 PM |
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this post has been edited 2 time(s)
^ Str8 Up SUPA, I Agree.. Flow & Imagery Was Dope
Sick Rhyming Scheme 2, SIX Dont Sleep.. n Wutt Up Ripz
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-*FoCuS*-
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.::.Nas.::.Jay Z.::. Eminem.::.Biggy.::.
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7/17/2006 11:43:53 PM |
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daymn rippa that shit was ill.. really nice.. poetic and emotional.. dopeness..
good to see you still doing your thing..
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TruMiC
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7/17/2006 11:58:53 PM |
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really feelin the flow and vocab, nice drop bro
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Chi Money
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7/18/2006 12:12:07 AM |
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posted by supaman
quote
posted by rippa
I'm Suffering, cuz I know, only Time Can Heal These Wounds On My Heart
But The Sooner I Start, I can cope with the fact That Our Rooms Are Apart
Cuz My Emotions keep changing with every second that passes
But with every second that passes, I wish for the seconds to go faster
I Keep lookin for the light in the midst of this darkness,
when the slits r the sharpest
I get down on my knees and put my fists 2 the carpet
..Imagery Is Amzing...Very Emotional
And I Pray to God, to make the Pain go away neva come back
Damn, If knew love felt like this, I'd have neva done that
I Did Plenty of things wrong, and I'm sorry for all of it
4 The Largest & Smallest Fit,
I'm Taking My Pride and I'm Swallowing All of it
But I'm moving on now, cuz I'm fightin for life
Usin my blood for the ink and a Knife when I write
No longer walkin with my wife on the right, just my son on the left
But now I'm not walkin, cuz I'm runnin from death
So I take my thumb off the gun and my tongue off the rest
I won't Let Death take Me, Dawg I'm Not Done with my Breath
Once MOre Ya Imagery Is CRazy
Along With The Flow ..EMotions Runnin Over
I use these words for my therapy and clarity, I Don't care if your fair to me
But don't mistake these words for weakness Dawg, I don't dare you stare at me
Cuz Even though I'm Hurt, I'm a Man & I Ride with my Pride
I'll Neva Give Up, I keep my eye on the prize
The Only difference now... Is I'm Dyin Inside!!!
8.9/10
Nice Drop The flow Was Off The Charts
Imagery And EMotion Were Devstating
Nice DRop Rippa UPPPPPPPPPPPPP
Couldn't agree more, excellent spit fam, keep it up
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BlackGloves
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7/18/2006 12:21:48 AM |
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got that crack flow yeah keep that shit up dope stuff
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Mike_Bizzle25
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 7/18/2006 3:30:33 AM |
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Damn was sup rippa glad to c u back n 6 world ill key 2
flow: 8.9 stayed the whole way threu
multis: 9
Creativity: 10
enjoyment: 10
This was my favorite line
I use these words for my therapy and clarity, I Don't care if your fair to me
But don't mistake these words for weakness Dawg, I don't dare you stare at me
Cuz Even though I'm Hurt, I'm a Man & I Ride with my Pride
I'll Neva Give Up, I keep my eye on the prize
The Only difference now... Is I'm Dyin Inside!!!
uppin this
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